I will professionally critique and edit your query letter twice
About this Gig
Need a compelling query letter that captures a literary agents attention?
Your query letter is often your first opportunity to make a strong impression on a literary agent. A clear, engaging, and well-polished query can help communicate your books unique appeal and encourage agents to learn more about your manuscript.
I will professionally critique and line edit your query letter twice, helping you improve its clarity, flow, structure, and overall presentation while preserving your unique authorial voice.
Whether you are a first-time author or an experienced writer preparing for your next submission, I will provide thoughtful, constructive feedback to help you refine your query letter and present your story with confidence.
️ WHAT MY SERVICE INCLUDES
Professional Query Letter Critique: Receive constructive feedback on your query letters strengths and areas that may need improvement.
Detailed Line Editing: Improve grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, word choice, and readability.
Stronger Opening Hook: Get suggestions to make your opening more engaging and encourage agents to keep reading.
Clarity and Flow: Refine your wording and improve the overall flow of your query letter.
Language:
English
Genre:
Children’s books
Audience :
Adult
POV:
First person
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is a query letter, and why does it need editing?
A query letter introduces your book to literary agents and helps them decide whether they want to learn more about your manuscript. I will review your query letter and provide constructive feedback to improve its clarity, structure, grammar, flow, and overall presentation.
What does your query letter editing service include?
My service includes a detailed critique and line editing to help improve your query letter. I will focus on grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, word choice, clarity, and the effectiveness of your book's hook and premise, where appropriate.
What does two rounds of editing mean?
Two rounds give you an opportunity to refine your query letter through a structured editing process. The first round identifies areas for improvement, while the second round focuses on reviewing your revised letter and addressing remaining issues within the purchased package.
What do I need to provide before you begin?
Please provide your query letter in an editable document or a format agreed upon before ordering. If possible, include your book's genre, target audience, a brief synopsis, and any specific concerns you would like me to address.
Do you work with both fiction and nonfiction query letters?
Yes. I can critique and edit query letters for fiction and nonfiction projects. Please include your book's genre and intended audience when placing your order so I can tailor my feedback appropriately.

