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Susan.

@susan_expert30

Honest Beta Reading with Detailed Manuscript Feedback and Overall Reader Report

United States
English
About me
I'm Susan, a Beta Reader and alpha reader and Editor for romance, fantasy, romantasy, thriller, mystery, sci-fi, and YA fiction manuscripts. I provide beta reading for romance, fantasy, thriller, mystery, sci-fi, and YA fiction, focusing on pacing, plot, character development, readability, and reader engagement. I also evaluate what works well and what doesn't, what seems confused, and I provide practical suggestions for improvement. My goal is to help authors improve their writing and present professionally polished books for publishing. Let’s bring your story to life together.... Read more

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Work experience

Fiverr

Beta Reader & Fiction Editor

Fiverr • Self-employed

Sep 2026 - Present • 1 mo

I’ve spent the past several years reading and reviewing fiction manuscripts for independent authors, with a particular focus on romance, fantasy, romantasy, thriller, mystery, sci-fi, and YA fiction. My work involves looking beyond grammar and spelling to understand how a story feels from a reader’s point of view. I review pacing, plot development, character arcs, dialogue, readability, consistency, and overall reader engagement. I also pay attention to confusing sections, weak transitions, unanswered questions, and moments where the story may lose momentum. Over time, I’ve helped authors identify areas that need more development while also pointing out the parts of their manuscripts that are already working well. My feedback is honest, practical, and designed to give writers clear direction without taking away their individual voice. Key achievements: Reviewed fiction manuscripts across multiple genres and age categories. Provided detailed beta and alpha reading feedback from a reader’s perspective. Helped authors identify pacing, plot, character, and continuity issues. Provided practical suggestions for strengthening story flow and reader engagement. Worked with authors preparing manuscripts for professional editing and publishing.