I will provide an encouraging developmental edit with next steps

My detailed, encouraging feedback and advice give you next steps to revise your story for success. I'll identify what works and share opportunities to improve the manuscript's content, structure, plot and character arcs, theme, voice and style, worldbuilding and more. My suggestions ensure strong organization, avoid plot holes, and help meet reader expectations for each story's genre.

My Standard and Premium edits include some example line-by-line suggestions and comments on grammar, style, flow, and impact. The majority of feedback, including large-scale advice on style and grammar, will come in a written Memo.

A complete line or copyedit, which ensures each sentence in the story is correct, consistent, and effective, can be arranged - contact me for details.

In some cases, I can offer advice on where or how to publish the story or help you refine your current plans. Let me know if this something you're interested in.