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I will audit plot holes, power system, and character consistency in your novel
Reader Perspective Specialist for Xianxia, Cultivation and Progression Fantasy
Founder of "The Reader Beyond" — helping authors understand stories through the reader's perspective.
13,000+ reading hours • 500+ novels read • 200M+ words explored across fantasy, xianxia, wuxia,...
About this Gig
Is your novel breaking its own rules?
Plot holes, inconsistent power systems, and character contradictions can confuse readers and weaken immersion. I'll audit your novel from both a logic and reader perspective to identify these problems.
I've spent 5+ years and 13,000+ hours reading web fiction, over 200 million words across 500+ novels, including Fantasy, Xianxia, Wuxia, Cultivation, LitRPG, Progression Fantasy, Isekai, and more.
What I check:
- Plot holes, contradictions & missing logic
- Power/magic-system rules, abilities, costs & progression
- Character behavior, motivation, knowledge & abilities
- Cause-and-effect logic
- Timeline & continuity
- Worldbuilding rules & loopholes
- Reader-confusion points
What you'll receive:
- Problem locations
- Why each issue matters
- Severity/priority ranking
- Practical fixes
- A written audit report
Important: This is an analysis service, not proofreading, line editing, or rewriting.
Packages cover 15, 30, or 70 chapters. Each chapter should normally be up to about 1,500 words. For longer chapters or larger manuscripts, don't hesitate to contact me first.
Best for Fantasy, LitRPG, Cultivation, Progression Fantasy, Isekai & web fiction.
Language:
English
Content type:
Book
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you not work with?
Yes. I currently don’t accept projects primarily focused on BL/MM romance, Futanari, Shotacon, or sexual content involving minors. GL and heterosexual romance may be accepted if they fit my areas of expertise. Please message me if you are unsure.
What genres do you specialize in?
I specialize in Xianxia, Wuxia, Xuanhuan, Cultivation, Progression Fantasy, LitRPG, Isekai, Power Progression, Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Harem, YA, and mature/adult romance or erotic fiction. Other fantasy and web-fiction projects may be considered case by case
Do I need a finished manuscript?
No. In-progress work is fine — catching issues early saves you from bigger rewrites later.
Can I send just one part of my novel, not the whole thing?
Yes. Just note the chapter range you want covered when you order.
What if you don't find many issues?
That's a good outcome for you — I'll still send a full report confirming what I checked and noting any minor items I did find, even if there's nothing major.
Do you accept incomplete/first-draft manuscripts?
Yes, but note that very early drafts (under 5 chapters) may not have enough story built yet to meaningfully audit for consistency issues.
Is my manuscript confidential?
Yes. Your manuscript, ideas, and project details are treated as confidential and will not be shared with others or used publicly without your permission.
Do you use AI to write reports?
No. The analysis, observations, conclusions, and recommendations are my own. AI may be used only for minor organizational or formatting assistance. Your feedback is based on my own reading and judgment.
