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I will provide a professional pre story blueprint for your world
Story Dynamics Mapper und Narrative Systems Analyst: Pre Story Diagnostics
I believe the best stories don’t happen by accident. They happen when the foundation is solid.
I explore the fundamental conditions from which stories arise: fractures, tensions, stabilising forces, a...
About this Gig
Regardless of writers block, disorientation, or simply losing track. Those who build highly complex worlds need a waterproof foundation.
Every Brain-Dump and every Note has the Potential for in-depth analysis. Its already a whole universe you built.️️
What you get (The Deliverables):
- System Analysis Dossier: A structured report identifying logical cracks, power fractures, and hidden tensions.
- Character Logic Check: Deep-dive into motivations to ensure actions align with psychology and system pressure.
- Actionable Roadmap: Concrete steps to fix inconsistencies before they become plot holes.
Result: You gain clarity, stability, and the confidence to write knowing your world holds together.
If the foundation holds, the entire world holds.
perfect for: Fantasy/Sci-Fi creators, stuck writers, and worldbuilders overwhelmed by their own lore. (Note: Structural analysis only. No proofreading, proofreading or graphics.)
Not sure? Start with the Quick Narrative Fix ($25)!. Its the perfect low-risk way to test my style before committing to a larger project.
Questions? Feel free to dm me anytime.
Language:
English
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German
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Who is this offer for?
Ideal for indie authors, game developers, TTRPG and narrative projects. My focus is on fantasy, Sci-Fi and related genres, particularly dark fantasy, psychological worlds, and complex systems and power structures.
Is the entire script necessary?
The full script is not required. Bullet points about your world are sufficient. My work is system-focused, not text-focused. Bullet points and rough drafts are preferred!
How much text can I send?
Send me your worldbuilding notes, magic system description, character sketches. Either: A jumble of bullet points, brainstorming notes, a short summary (approx. 200–1000) words (2-4p.)). I will deliver a comprehensive logic check and deep-dive analysis. context: “Letharis” had 150 words given.
What’s included in the Narrative Fix?
Output: 1-2 pages of deep systemic diagnosis Input: one question + 200-500 character description: focused answer on ONE key question that is of particular concern to the author (e.g. “Does my magic system work?” or “Is my antagonist believable?”).
What‘s included in the Standard package?
In-depth analysis: character psychology, power structures, underlying tensions, interconnections and pressing questions that need answering so that your world rests on a solid foundation. Not included: scorecard, summary, possible courses of action, exercises to explore your world in greater depth
What’s included in the Premium package?
Whole systemic narrative blueprint (Dossier & questions that needs to be answered): + a visual scorecard, a concise summary of the key findings, scenario-based experiments, factional analysis and possible courses of action. (Letharis example)
Is everything confidential?
Yes. All ideas, characters, and world-building elements remain strictly confidential. I do not share content and only use it for feedback and the development of your world. An NDA can be provided on request.
Do you use AI for analysis?
No! My analysis, logic and ideas are 100% human. I translate the finished German report into English with save tools. This way, you get the depth of thought from the German text in clear, understandable English. The quality comes from me; the language comes from the tool (DeepL/Pons).
Why German first, then English?
Because complex logic and nuances are more precise in German. I analyse in my native language for maximum depth and only then translate the result. This avoids shallow “Denglish” analyses and gives real readable substance.
What does “Revision” mean?
1x Clarification session included: If you have any questions about the dossier you have received, you are welcome to ask for clarification. I do not completely rewrite your story idea if you make fundamental changes to it after receiving the analysis.
