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Thompson mary
@thompsonmary4
DEVELOPMENTAL BOOK EDITOR
United Kingdom
English, Spanish, Italian, German, French
About me
I am Mary, a professional Developmental Book Editor with over 9 years of experience helping authors shape stronger, clearer, and more engaging manuscripts. I specialize in developmental editing for fiction and nonfiction books, focusing on plot development, story structure, pacing, character growth, dialogue, emotional depth, and overall manuscript flow.
My editing approach is detailed, constructive, and reader-focused, helping writers strengthen weak areas, improve consistency, and create stories that connect naturally with readers while preserving their unique voice.
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Developmental Editing
I will proofread, developmental book editing, novel editor, dark fantasy, romance book
Developmental Editing
I will proofread, developmental book editing, novel editor, memoir fiction,dark fantasy
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mitchell_krane
Repeat Client
United States
Outstanding copy editing with great attention to grammar, consistency, punctuation, and word choice. The manuscript is much cleaner and more professional while still sounding like my own writing. An excellent experience from beginning to end.
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hartwellemily
Germany
Outstanding developmental editing! The feedback was detailed, insightful, and greatly improved the structure, clarity, and flow of my manuscript, while preserving my voice. Communication was excellent, delivery was on time, and the professionalism was exceptional. I highly recommend this editor and will definitely work with them again.
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mitchell_krane
Repeat Client
United States
Thorough, professional, and highly detailed copy editing. The manuscript is now consistent, easy to read, and free of distracting errors. Every edit improved the overall quality without losing the original voice. I highly recommend this service to any author.
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camillakartal
Repeat Client
Canada
I had an excellent experience working with this editor. The developmental feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and focused on strengthening the story without changing my voice as the author. Every suggestion was practical and clearly explained, helping me improve the structure, pacing, character development,...
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camillakartal
Repeat Client
Canada
Mary gave excellent feedback on my novel, which made clear that she’d thought deeply about its structure and goals. Her report went deep on plot arc, pacing, characterization and relationships, giving me a clear sense of where I needed to focus on revisions and my overall closeness to publication readiness....
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