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Tofunmi R
@tofsreadwise2
Honest, indepth feedback to strengthen your story
Nigeria
English
About me
Hi! I’m a dedicated beta reader with a strong eye for story flow, character depth, and reader engagement. I provide clear, honest, and actionable feedback to help authors strengthen their manuscripts before publishing or querying. My focus is on plot clarity, pacing, consistency, and emotional impact. I read with a genuine reader’s perspective while keeping your voice and vision intact. Your work is always handled with care and confidentiality.
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Beta Reading
I will beta read your fiction, romance or fantasy novel with detailed reader feedback
Developmental Editing
I will provide developmental editing and a detailed manuscript critique
Work experience
Proofreader & Beta Reader
Freelance
Jul 2025 - Present • 1 yr
I work as a freelance beta reader, providing reader-focused feedback to authors at different stages of their manuscripts. My work focuses on plot coherence, pacing, character development, clarity, and overall reader engagement. I provide honest, constructive feedback designed to help writers strengthen their stories before editing or publication. I have experience reviewing short stories, novellas, and full-length manuscripts across multiple genres.
Freelance Beta Reader
Self-Employed • Freelance
Oct 2024 - Present • 1 yr 9 mos
Provided detailed beta reading feedback for fiction and non-fiction manuscripts. Evaluated plot structure, pacing, character development, clarity, and reader engagement. Delivered actionable revision notes and reader reactions to help authors improve their work.
Manuscript Reviewer
Independent Projects • Freelance
Aug 2023 - Present • 2 yrs 11 mos
Reviewed manuscripts and short stories, providing structured feedback on narrative flow, tone, pacing, and character consistency. Focused on reader experience and clarity rather than line-by-line editing.
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rachelmvreed
United States
Working with Tofunmi R was an exceptional experience from start to finish. Her beta review of my debut novel was thoughtful, detailed, and incredibly well written. Her eloquence, professionalism, and insightful feedback gave me greater confidence in my manuscript and helped bring my dream of becoming...
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kkvossauthor
United States
Received valuable feedback on my novel in progress which helped me develop the story, characters, and overall plot better.
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benbruzz
United States
Tofunmi was a fantastic beta reader, providing detailed feedback and improvements throughout the entirety of the manuscript. My book was transformed for the better using her feedback; her deep knowledge of writing, syntax, and imagery transformed my book from an educational, dry textbook-like read into...
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mira_larkin
United States
Tofunmi provided thoughtful, timely beta reader feedback for my debut romance novel manuscript. She provided in-line comments on my Google Doc and also sent me email updates, which I found helpful. Her feedback style is positive and clear. I am grateful for Tofunmi's keen eye and appreciated her enthusiasm and support of my project!
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cheryl_hodges24
United States
Tofunmi is a great beta reader. She puts real thought into her follow-ups. She gives great feedback on pacing, characters and the overall story. I would be glad to have her work on my other books.
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