I will provide script coverage feedback, script notes for your movie script or tv pilot
Award winning writer, Novelist and Journalist
About this Gig
A script can be technically complete and still leave important questions unanswered: Does the story hold together? Are the characters driving the plot? Does the dialogue sound lived-in rather than written?
I provide professional script coverage, screenplay feedback, script notes, and TV pilot analysis for writers who want a clear outside assessment before rewriting, submitting, pitching, or sharing their work.
My approach is detailed, I read the screenplay from beginning to end first as a reader, paying attention to the experience of the story without interrupting that first impression. I then go back through the script analytically to identify the specific choices creating that experience.
Coverage focuses on:
- Script summary and clear coverage grid
- Logline creation or optimization
- Scene-by-scene or act-by-act feedback
- Character arcs & development analysis
- Pacing, structure, & story flow evaluation
- Dialogue & tone notes
My feedback does not stop at saying that a scene is slow or that a character needs development. I explain what is causing the issue on the page, how it affects the reader and what you should examine when revising it.
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Language:
English
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Spanish
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is the difference between script doctoring and script coverage?
Script coverage evaluates your screenplay and explains what is working and what needs improvement. Script doctoring goes further by working directly on the material through editing, rewriting, restructuring, dialogue polish, or scene-level improvements, depending on the package.
Will you rewrite my entire screenplay?
That depends on the condition of the script and the package selected. I can revise specific scenes, dialogue, character moments, or structural sections. For a full screenplay rewrite or major restructuring, please message me first so I can review the scope.
Will you keep my original voice and story?
Yes. My goal is to strengthen the screenplay you are trying to write, not replace it with my own version. I preserve your characters, tone, genre, central concept, and intended direction while improving the areas that are weakening the script.
Can I tell you what specific problems I am worried about?
Absolutely. If you are concerned about pacing, a character arc, dialogue, the ending, a particular scene, or another issue, mention it when placing the order. I will keep those concerns in mind while still evaluating the screenplay as a whole.
What should I send before ordering?
Send your screenplay, the approximate page count, and a short note explaining what stage the project is in and what kind of help you need. If the script requires major rewriting or structural work, message me before ordering so I can recommend the right package.

