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I will audit and rewrite your cold call script for higher connect rates
About this Gig
Is your cold call script getting hung up on in the first 10 seconds? I fix that.
I'm a B2B sales leader with 20+ years' experience (Dell, Veeam, Veritas, Kaseya, Unitrends) and I've personally built and refined live cold-calling scripts, including a full rewrite for an AI automation service targeting small business owners moving it from a rehearsed pitch to something that actually earns attention.
What I do:
- Audit your current script line by line flag where prospects tune out
- Rewrite the opening for curiosity, not "pitch mode"
- Rebuild objection-handling to sound natural, not defensive
- Tailor tone and language to your specific industry and buyer
I don't write generic sales copy I write scripts built from real sales-floor experience, so they sound like a confident conversation, not a script.
Message me your current script (or your product/offer if starting fresh) and I'll tell you honestly what's working and what isn't before you order.
Outreach channel:
Phone / cold calling
Engagement model:
Project-based
Language:
English
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FAQ
Do you need my current script, or can you write one from scratch?
Either works. If you have an existing script, I'll audit it and rewrite what's not working. If you're starting from scratch, send me your product/service and target buyer, and I'll build the script around that.
What if I don't know why my script isn't converting?
That's exactly what the audit is for. I'll review your script line by line and identify where prospects likely lose interest or object — you don't need to diagnose it yourself before ordering.
Will this work for my industry?
The core principles of a strong opening and natural objection-handling apply across most B2B industries. Message me your industry and target buyer before ordering so I can confirm fit and tailor the language accordingly.
How is this different from generic sales copywriting?
I've personally run live cold-calling campaigns, not just written scripts on request. The rewrite is grounded in what actually happens on a real call — where people hesitate, hang up, or push back — not just persuasive writing theory.
Can I request revisions if the tone isn't quite right?
Yes — Standard and Premium packages include revision rounds. I want the script to sound like your business, not a template, so adjustments to tone and language are expected as part of the process.
