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TORIOLA
@toridraft
Book editor
Nigeria
English, French, German, Spanish
About me
Hi, I’m Tori a dedicated beta reader and book editor working across all genres.
I help authors strengthen their stories through clear, constructive, and honest feedback. Whether you're polishing your final draft or shaping your manuscript before querying, I provide detailed insights on:
• Plot & structure
• Character development
• Pacing & flow
• Clarity & readability
• Dialogue authenticity
• Grammar & consistency
My goal is simple: help you turn a good manuscript into a compelling, market-ready book.
I work with new and experienced authors alike and treat every project with care.
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Average response time: 1 hour
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Beta Reading
I will beta read your romance fantasy give you critique as a beta reader
Beta Reading
I will beta read romance beta reader fantasy, fiction, alpha read your manuscript
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voicedbyshannon
Repeat Client
United States
thanks for going over these chapters and let me know what you think of them so far. it's good to have some positive feedback on some of the details that you've enjoyed so far as well as you give me insight of what I need to evolve myself to revise and improve upon. thank you for taking time out of your...
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voicedbyshannon
Repeat Client
United States
Thank you for going through this chapter and give me some insight of what has actually worked. Your details have a help me to gain some insight of I really need to add to fill in some of the gaps that you found reading through this text. Thank you for taking your time out of your day to point out the...
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ryanriella
United States
This has been such a valuable experience. Toriola has been confirming concerns I had about my manuscript and the feedback has been incredibly helpful. I appreciate the thoughtful notes that I have received and actually look forward to their critiques!
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kenbridgeman
United States
The reviewer provided specific and actionable feedback to make my story better. The reviewer connected elements to prior reveals in the story showing high engagement and attention to detail. Review never broke down into simply complimentary platitudes but asked hard questions on how to tighten the story to levy the greatest impact to the reader.
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scarlet_thorne
Repeat Client
United States
Stumbled upon Tori for my BETA reads, and I was grateful I did! After a slump with my editing phase, the feedback Tori provides for the gist 6 chapters of my manuscript really gave me the extra kick of motivation for my sequel! Thank you Tori!
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