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I will fix continuity errors, story structure, developmental editor for fiction series
A great book starts with a great manuscript and great editing brings it to life
I’m Vanessa Nancy, a professional book editor with 5+ years of experience helping indie authors and publishers refine their manuscripts.
I specialize in developmental editing, structural editing, li...
About this Gig
A fiction series can lose readers when timelines slip, character details change, or a plot loses momentum. I will fix continuity errors, strengthen story structure, and provide developmental editing for fiction series so each book supports the larger story.
Too close to your manuscript to spot plot holes, rushed pacing, weak transitions, or world-building contradictions? I'll provide practical notes while respecting your voice. I focus on plot logic, character arcs, timeline consistency, pacing, and details that must stay consistent across sequels.
I work with novels, sequels, fantasy, romance, mystery, and thrillers. Your package may include an annotated manuscript, continuity notes, and an editorial summary.
You'll get a clear scope, careful attention to story details, and direct communication. Share your genre, word count, and main concern before ordering.
Ready to make your story tighter and your series more consistent? Send your manuscript details to get started.
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FAQ
What is the difference between developmental editing and proofreading?
Developmental editing focuses on the bigger picture: plot structure, pacing, character arcs, story logic, and narrative consistency. Proofreading focuses on surface-level errors such as spelling, grammar, and punctuation. This gig is primarily for story-level editing and continuity review.
Can you find continuity errors across multiple books?
Yes, provided the relevant material and reference documents are included in the agreed scope. Share previous-book summaries, character notes, timelines, or your series bible so I can check details against established story facts. Full multi-book audits require a custom quote.
Will you rewrite my story or change my writing voice?
My focus is to identify inconsistencies, explain structural problems, and suggest practical improvements while respecting your style. Full ghostwriting or extensive rewriting is not included unless separately agreed.
Can you edit my full novel?
Yes, larger projects can be discussed through a custom offer. Send your total word count, genre, manuscript format, and the type of editorial help you need before ordering. The listed packages cover only their stated word limits.
What will I receive when the edit is complete?
Depending on your package, you will receive editorial comments, a continuity or story-structure review, and a summary of key issues and suggested next steps.
Can you work on romance, fantasy, thriller, mystery, or other fiction?
Yes, provided the manuscript fits my areas of expertise. Send me your genre and a short description of the project before ordering if you're unsure.
Will I receive actual suggestions for fixing the problems?
Yes. My aim is not simply to tell you that something is weak. I explain what is affecting the reading experience and give you practical direction for revision.
