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Felix
@vnz_felix
Making your opening pages impossible to put down
Brazil
English
About me
Hi, I'm Felix!
Want to know if your story hooks readers from page one? I give honest, raw feedback from a modern reader's perspective.
I'm addicted in First Chapters, Short Stories, and Webnovel drafts. No generic reviews here—I focus on real engagement: Does your hook work? Is the pacing fast enough?
What you get:
First Impression Report (pacing, hook & characters)
In-line Reactions on Google Docs/Word (where I got excited or bored)
I read Romance, Sci-Fi, Fantasy, Thrillers & Action. Let's make your opening impossible to put down! Send a message!
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Beta Reading
I will be your beta reader for your first chapter
