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I will expertly beta read your science fiction work
Gig Summary
Published author, linguist, and professional editor
An experienced publishing expert of over 25 years, with a PhD in Linguistics from the USA. I help authors succeed on their publishing journey with expert beta reading, editing, and coaching. I am also...
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Vyvyan Evans was selected by the Fiverr Pro team for their expertise.
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Beta Reading
Book Editing
What people loved about this freelancer
baileyvpedersen
United States
I hired Vyv to review my science fiction novel, and I received a 31-page report with very actionable feedback that I found extremely helpful! I am very pleased...
harperrun
United States
I was extremely impressed with Vyv’s work. His feedback was thoughtful, detailed, and clearly based on a careful reading of the manuscript. He identified both...
lorasf
United States
I got a lot of great feedback from Vyvan that I am looking forward to applying to my novel. He gave me examples to help me understand how to make the novel...
angus_love
United Kingdom
This feedback went well beyond my expectations. The thoroughness and level of understanding of what I was trying to achieve throughout my manuscript was exceptional. Don't let the opportunity to use Vyv pass you by.
nathanlindberg
United States
Vyvyan provided thoughtful and insightful editorial comments on my novel. I appreciate the fact that he determined what I wanted from my book and worked to enhance it.
About this Gig
Vetted Pro
Move your novel to the next level with an expert editorial report with clear actionable recommendations to enhance your work.
I am a successfully published, best-selling author, with multiple Kirkus-starred reviews, and over 25 years editorial experience, helping other creatives finesse their creative output. Based on my extensive international publishing success and experience, I will read your work with an expert eye for what works, what could be improved, and questions that I was left with after reading your work.
I will provide a constructive, discerning reader report, with my overall assessment on:
- Readability: here I address the flow of the story, points that dragged or were rushed, points where there was any confusion.
- Emotional impact and reader engagement: here I address how effectively the story and characters resonate for the reader, and general enjoyability.
My report will also include specific feedback on:
- Writing style
- Plot and any obvious plot holes/inconsistencies
- Characters and character arcs
Should you have any specific questions or points of uncertainty about your work, please feel free to include those in your order and I will address those in my report.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Samsung
Electrical Engineering
Nationwide project launched by Samsung to document a new digital dictionary of self-expression. Campaign aimed to curate the lexicon of human expression – led by Vyvyan Evans, PHD and Professor of Linguistics.
Mar 2022-Dec 2022
FAQ
My work lies somewhere between the word count bands in your package. Will you still charge the full amount?
If the word count of your piece lies somewhere between the word count bands, send me a message with the exact word count, and I'll reply with a Custom Offer to save you money.
Do you accept longer works of fiction?
Absolutely. Provide me with the exact word count and I’ll be pleased to provide a Custom Offer.
What can I expect when you deliver the critique of my work?
My Beta Reader Reports vary in length depending on the complexity of the work and how much support I need to provide. As a minimum, my Beta Reader reports are 4+ pages for short works, up to 15+ pages for longer works.
Do you use AI?
I do not use AI in any way. I am the only person reading your work and writing the reader report. My expertise and experience is what you are paying for. And that is what you will get!
What's your process in reading my work and preparing your report?
Depending on the length of your work, I will aim to read your piece in one (or more) sittings over consecutive days, compiling comments and reactions as I go. After reading, I spend several hours reviewing my comments and preparing the reader report. I usually work on one project at a time.
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baileyvpedersen
United States
I hired Vyv to review my science fiction novel, and I received a 31-page report with very actionable feedback that I found extremely helpful! I am very pleased with the feedback and consider hiring Vyv to be money well spent!
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?H 
harperrun
United States
I was extremely impressed with Vyv’s work. His feedback was thoughtful, detailed, and clearly based on a careful reading of the manuscript. He identified both what was working and where the story could be stronger, with specific observations I can actually use in revision. Professional, insightful, and...
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?L lorasf
United States
I got a lot of great feedback from Vyvan that I am looking forward to applying to my novel. He gave me examples to help me understand how to make the novel better, and he gave me an order of priority for addressing the problems. Overall, great feedback that will help take my novel to the next level.
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A angus_love
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationThis feedback went well beyond my expectations. The thoroughness and level of understanding of what I was trying to achieve throughout my manuscript was exceptional. Don't let the opportunity to use Vyv pass you by.
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?1 person found this review helpful.N nathanlindberg
United States
Ongoing collaborationVyvyan provided thoughtful and insightful editorial comments on my novel. I appreciate the fact that he determined what I wanted from my book and worked to enhance it.
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
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B baileyvpedersen
United States
I hired Vyv to review my science fiction novel, and I received a 31-page report with very actionable feedback that I found extremely helpful! I am very pleased with the feedback and consider hiring Vyv to be money well spent!
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?H harperrun
United States
I was extremely impressed with Vyv’s work. His feedback was thoughtful, detailed, and clearly based on a careful reading of the manuscript. He identified both what was working and where the story could be stronger, with specific observations I can actually use in revision. Professional, insightful, and...
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?L lorasf
United States
I got a lot of great feedback from Vyvan that I am looking forward to applying to my novel. He gave me examples to help me understand how to make the novel better, and he gave me an order of priority for addressing the problems. Overall, great feedback that will help take my novel to the next level.
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A angus_love
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationThis feedback went well beyond my expectations. The thoroughness and level of understanding of what I was trying to achieve throughout my manuscript was exceptional. Don't let the opportunity to use Vyv pass you by.
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?1 person found this review helpful.N nathanlindberg
United States
Ongoing collaborationVyvyan provided thoughtful and insightful editorial comments on my novel. I appreciate the fact that he determined what I wanted from my book and worked to enhance it.
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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