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I will developmental edit your fantasy, romance, or romantasy novel
Ebook and Book Designer, Professional Book Formatting, Layout and Cover Design
I’m Williams, a book and ebook designer focused on turning manuscripts into clean, professional, reader-friendly books. I understand how frustrating it can be to have a great manuscript but struggle w...
About this Gig
Is your fantasy or romance novel finished, but the story still feels slow, confusing, emotionally flat, or not quite ready for readers?
I will developmental edit your fantasy, romance, or romantasy manuscript and help you understand what is working, what needs revision, and where readers may lose interest.
I can review:
- Plot structure, stakes, conflict, and story logic
- Pacing, tension, turning points, and chapter flow
- Character goals, motivation, arcs, and emotional depth
- Romance chemistry, conflict, progression, and payoff
- Fantasy world-building, rules, consistency, and integration
- Point of view, scene purpose, clarity, and reader engagement
Depending on your package, you will receive a written editorial letter, in-document comments, and chapter-by-chapter developmental feedback. My notes are clear, constructive, and focused on practical revision decisions while respecting your voice and creative vision.
This service is for fantasy, romance, romantasy, young adult, and related fiction. Send your manuscript, word count, genre, synopsis, and main concerns before ordering so I can recommend the right package.
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Language:
English
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French
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German
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Italian
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Other
Genre:
Adventure
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Fanfiction
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Horror/ thriller
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Romance
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Fantasy
Audience :
Teen / young adult
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Adult
POV:
First person
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Third person limited
Complexity level:
Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What does developmental editing include?
It reviews the big-picture elements of your story, including plot, pacing, characters, romance development, world-building, chapter flow, point of view, and reader experience.
What will I receive?
Depending on the package, you will receive an editorial letter, comments inside the manuscript, and chapter-by-chapter developmental notes with practical revision suggestions.
Do you edit fantasy, romance, and romantasy?
Yes. I focus on fantasy, romance, romantasy, young adult, and related fiction. Please message me first about complex timelines, extensive world-building, or sensitive content.
What should I send before ordering?
Send your manuscript or sample, word count, genre, synopsis, chapter outline if available, and the main areas where you want editorial help.
Can you help me fix plot holes and improve my story structure?
Yes. I will review your manuscript for plot holes, weak story logic, unclear stakes, pacing issues, missing connections, and underdeveloped scenes. My feedback will explain the problem and suggest practical revision directions while leaving the writing and final creative decisions in your hands.
