I will write coverage and script notes on your screenplay

Absolutely not. AI is a tool, but a very ignorant and not helpful one for what I do. Your audience is human people, not algorithms or AI. You will always need a human who experiences emotion to tell you what actually works vs. what doesn't on some level. There is no math to avoid that fact.

Most coverage providers will skew their feedback positive to give a more pleasant experience and avoid negative reviews. I'm always 100% honest, clear and constructive in my feedback. My goal is to help you create the best story possible, which cannot be achieved without accurate, honest assessment.

I used to regularly give script development notes to one of the greatest screenwriters of all time (acc to every top 5 list on the internet). He listened to me and took my notes because I am seriously that good. Very least, I can jailbreak your thinking and open your script up to new possibilities.

Yes! I work with many managers, producers, and agents. I will deliver a pass, consider, or recommend rating for both the writer and the script + synopsis. I can also evaluate books, graphic novels, short stories, articles, classic Greek poems, and any other IP for adaptation with a custom gig offer.

If your script exceeds the feature page limit, message me to discuss a custom gig. If it's 121-128 pages, chances are I won't care, but once you get into the 130+ range, it's a different ask. Packages are based on max length. In this case, you will need to purchase the package with the longer length

It's hard to give exact page counts because every script is different. I don't want to waste your time padding notes to reach a page count or leave out crucial feedback to stay under a page limit. Shorts are usually around 1-3 pages, TV coverage around 2-5, and Feature coverage around 4-6. Minimum.

Indeed! Message me and we can see if a custom gig is a good fit and I can create a custom offer. Film and TV are the mains, but I evaluate Plays, Pitch Decks, Treatments and so on. If you have an idea, a concept, a story -- and it's written down -- i'll happily consult with you on how I can help.

Yes! Twice. One in 2019 and one in 2021. I'm currently writing a movie sequel on assignment for a major studio. I'm repped by an agent and a manager at the top agencies in Hollywood. If I can do it, so can you! Let's get your script in tip top shape!

1) Premise/Concept 2) Structure/Style 3) Plot/Story 4) Characters 5) Dialogue Each category scored X/10, for a total of Y/50. Having read 1,000+ of scripts in the past few years and collected the data over that span, the average score I've given is: 34/50 (68%).

"Pat is an amazing writer. The most psychically free individual I've met. He can conjure incredible imagery with no effort. I'm friends with a lot of good writers and he is the only truly talented person I know. It's like somehow he always pulls a pot of gold out of his @$$."