I will beta read and sensitivity read your story

I'm most familiar with fantasy, sci-fi, YA, and short stories! However, I'll happily read scripts of any genre and writing style.

• Please contact me before ordering, to ensure I can deliver! :)
• Timeline will depend on draft length.

What you'll get with this gig:

General Feedback

• Thoughts on the pacing and believability of the narrative
• Comments on any plotholes
• Suggested improvements

Copy & line edit

• Spelling, grammar, syntax, sentence flow
• Fix errors in dialogue and POV
• Edit wording to reduce redundancy and fluff

Sensitivity reading

• Point out stereotypes/cliches
• Ensure that your marginalized characters are fully fleshed out
• Identify problematic scenes
• Areas I know the most about:

Female experience (avoid misogynistic undertones!)

Asian-American experience (model minority myth, microaggressions)

Growing up in East Asia (culture check)

Socioeconomic privilege (perceived social value, can be culture-specific)

Acculturation (acclimating to a different country)

*NOTE: I can comment on other sensitivity topics and do my research, but if you have a specific experience/identity in mind, feedback from someone of that community/identity would be the best bet!

*PRICING: Priced per word