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I will beta read your novel and give honest expert feedback
About this Gig
Preparing to publish or query? Don't submit without a rigorous, professional evaluation.
My name is Alexia Vallone. As a dedicated fiction reader and tech professional with advanced training in cybersecurity analysis (JCAC), I bring structural insight, analytical precision, and sharp attention to detail to your manuscript. I don't just read your story, I analyze its bones.
I specialize in tracking pacing, tension, and developmental arcs across Thrillers, Romance, Fantasy, Action, and Mystery. Also, If your book features digital plots, complex technical details, or fast suspense, I ensure your story maintains absolute logical flow.
WHAT YOU RECEIVE IN YOUR COMPREHENSIVE DELIVERY:
ACTIONABLE INLINE COMMENTS: Extensive, chapter-by-chapter margin notes tracking my live reader experience. I highlight where your pacing slows, dialogue shines, or logic breaks down.
EXPANSIVE STRUCTURAL READER REPORT: A thorough developmental breakdown mapping your plot consistency, character transformations, world-building, and structural pacing.
OFFICIAL CERTIFICATE OF REVIEW: A formal PDF certificate validating your manuscript's critiqueperfect for sharing with your launch team.
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Is my unreleased manuscript safe with you?
Completely. I respect your intellectual property and creative hard work. All unreleased files, concepts, and manuscripts are treated with strict, ironclad confidentiality protocols and will never be shared, leaked, or distributed under any circumstances.
My book isn’t a techno-thriller. Will your feedback still be helpful?
Yes! While my tech background helps with specialized plots, my primary strength is analytical reading and structural dissection. Every genre requires airtight pacing, believable character arcs, and logical flow. I bring sharp focus and a fresh, objective reader's perspective to keep readers hooked!
What exactly is the "Certificate of Editorial Review" you provide?
It is a formal, professionally formatted PDF document verifying that your manuscript has undergone a thorough developmental critique and structural evaluation. Many indie authors use this certificate to build credibility, sharing it with their ARC launch teams, publishers, or on social media.
