I will do developmental editing for your fantasy book, proofreading, children

Want to make your children's fantasy story unforgettable?

Writing fantasy for kids is tough. You need an exciting magical world, but the story must stay fast-paced and age-appropriate. As a specialized childrens book editor, I provide the deep developmental editing your manuscript needs to hook young readers!

What I will check in your story:

• Worldbuilding: Is your magic system easy for kids to understand?
• Plot & Pacing: Are there plot holes? Does the story move fast enough?
• Characters: Are your young heroes relatable and fun?
• Tone: Is the vocabulary perfect for your target age group?

What you get:

• Detailed Editorial Report: Comprehensive feedback on what works and how to fix what doesn't.
• In-Line Comments: Direct notes on your MS Word manuscript using Track Changes.

Lets bring your magical world to life.