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I will professionally edit and critique your book manuscript
About this Gig
Ready to take your manuscript to the next level?
Writing a novel is no small feat! Whether you're working on your first draft or preparing for publication, I'm here to help strengthen your story with brutally honest and constructive feedback.
What is developmental editing?
Unlike proofreading or copyediting, developmental editing focuses on the big picture rather than only grammar and spelling. I'll help identify what's working, what needs improvement, and how to make your story more engaging while preserving your unique voice.
What I look for:
- Plot & Structure: Plot holes, progression, and consistency
- Pacing & Tension: Slow sections, rushed scenes, and engagement
- Characters: Motivations, relationships, and development
- Dialogue & POV: Natural dialogue and perspective
- Worldbuilding: Setting, logic, and consistency
- Themes: Emotional depth and impact
What you'll receive:
- An annotated manuscript with detailed comments
- Clear, actionable revision suggestions
- Honest feedback on strengths and weaknesses
Have questions, need a custom word count, or aren't sure which package to choose? Message me!
Let's make your story shine!
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is the difference between developmental editing and proofreading?
Developmental editing focuses on the big picture of your story, including plot, pacing, character development, and structure. Proofreading focuses on correcting spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors.
Will you make changes directly to my manuscript?
No. I'll provide detailed comments and actionable suggestions throughout your manuscript, explaining what works, what could be improved, and why. You'll remain in complete control of your story and any revisions you choose to make.
What genres do you work with?
I work with a variety of fiction genres, including fantasy, romance, mystery, thriller, science fiction, erotica and contemporary fiction. If you're unsure whether your manuscript is a good fit, feel free to message me before ordering!
Can you edit a manuscript longer than your listed packages?
Absolutely! If your manuscript exceeds my package word counts or falls somewhere in between, send me a message with your total word count. I'll be happy to discuss a custom offer tailored to your project.
Do I need to have a completed manuscript?
Not at all! I can provide developmental feedback on individual chapters, partial drafts, or completed novels. Whether you're just getting started or preparing for your next round of revisions, I'm happy to help.
Will you be honest if something in my story isn't working?
Absolutely! Honest, constructive feedback is the foundation of my editing process. I'll highlight your manuscript's strengths while identifying areas that need improvement, always offering thoughtful, practical suggestions to help you strengthen your story.
What file format should I submit?
Google docs and Microsoft Word is preferred, as it allows me to leave detailed comments directly within your manuscript. If you're working with another file format, please message me before ordering to discuss your options.
Will my manuscript remain confidential?
Yes! Your manuscript and ideas will be treated with confidentiality. I will not share, publish, distribute, or use your work without your permission. Your story remains entirely yours.
