I will complete a developmental edit of your novel by two editors
Gig Summary
Developmental Editors
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About this Gig
Ready to take the plunge and get some constructive feedback on your manuscript? How about feedback from an editing team?
We are a mother daughter editing duo who work together as educators, writers, and editors. We have a solid track record of providing excellent editorial services to our author customers both on Fiverr and off.
As seasoned English teachers, we are practiced at giving solid, constructive feedback that points out the elements of your writing that shine and the other parts that need work.
We will each read and respond to your manuscript offering constructive developmental feedback through inline commentary, light editing for flow, and some modeled rewrites.
We will follow up with a full in depth editorial report discussing:
- The first 50 pages
- Characterization
- Flow
- Consistency
- Voice
- World Building
- Pacing
- Dialogue
- Style
- Genre trends
We will accept manuscripts in the following genres:
- Romance (all heat levels and subgenres)
- YA
- Mystery
- Suspense
- Fantasy
- Literary Fiction
We look forward to working with you.
Language:
English
Genre:
Fantasy
Audience :
General readers
POV:
Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Advanced
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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J jaidanc
Repeat Client

United States
Thank you once again for helping me with this Chapter.
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?J jaidanc
Repeat Client

United States
Thank you for reviewing my three chapters!
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?J jaidanc
Repeat Client

United States
Thank you both for always being so thorough with your critiques. They really help me out as a writer.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
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Helpful?K 
kay_jay_bee90

Australia
The notes and comments provided were really useful for me to get an understanding of how a reader would see the book and also for what is working and what isn't working within the story line and character arcs. I appreciate the thoughtful and relevant feedback as it is all useable and helpful.
$200-$400
Price
8 weeks
Duration
Helpful?W 
webitheauthor

United Kingdom
I loved how quickly Angela Mikaela engaged and the quick turnaround to provide me with gaps in my children's story which I missed early, setting me up for success. There delivery was easy to understand and added value. I would be using them again and loved that I have 2 pair of eyes editing my work together. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?
99 reviews for this Gig
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| (3) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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J jaidanc
Repeat Client

United States
Thank you once again for helping me with this Chapter.
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?J jaidanc
Repeat Client

United States
Thank you for reviewing my three chapters!
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?J jaidanc
Repeat Client

United States
Thank you both for always being so thorough with your critiques. They really help me out as a writer.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
A 
Seller's Response
Helpful?K 
kay_jay_bee90

Australia
The notes and comments provided were really useful for me to get an understanding of how a reader would see the book and also for what is working and what isn't working within the story line and character arcs. I appreciate the thoughtful and relevant feedback as it is all useable and helpful.
$200-$400
Price
8 weeks
Duration
Helpful?W 
webitheauthor

United Kingdom
I loved how quickly Angela Mikaela engaged and the quick turnaround to provide me with gaps in my children's story which I missed early, setting me up for success. There delivery was easy to understand and added value. I would be using them again and loved that I have 2 pair of eyes editing my work together. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?
