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I will developmental edit and proofread, fiction, non fiction, fantasy novel book edit
4.9
4.9
United States
I speak English, Arabic, Dutch, German, French, Spanish, Norwegian
130 orders completed
Gig Summary
Developmental book editor
My name is Ariadne Vesper, and I specialise in developmental editing, proofreading, and comprehensive book editing across a wide range of genres, including romance, memoirs, novels, Sci-fi, dark roman...
Buyers keep returning
Ariadneve has an exceptional number of repeat buyers
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
sophiesal1994
United Kingdom
I'm really impressed with the feedback. Ariandneve is the first person to read my book, and the notes provided were exceptional. Each chapter was clearly broken...
maraz12345
Malta
The level of work is very good, would have expected more feedback in line with developmental editing, the editing was more of line editing. Also my manuscript...
jesuswins
United States
Excellent work. Ariadne provided an incredibly thorough and thoughtful review of my manuscript. Her feedback was detailed, constructive, and actionable, while...
walterecook3
United States
My second engagement and she keeps getting better. Others have said she feels more like a partner than a service provider and I couldn't agree more. This developmental...
About this Gig
I will developmental edit and proofread your fiction or non-fiction book with a focus on improving flow, structure, and readability while keeping your voice intact. I work with fantasy, thriller, memoir, crime story, and children's books.
What I offer:
- Clean, organized manuscript delivery
- Clear in-line suggestions to improve clarity and flow
- Proofreading for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and consistency
- Developmental editing for structure, pacing, plot, and character depth
- Feedback that helps you strengthen weak sections without losing your style
What you will get:
- Improved readability and stronger storytelling
- Careful attention to detail from start to finish
- Clear and honest feedback you can actually use
- A polished manuscript ready for publishing or submission
I treat every manuscript with focus and respect. If something is not working, I will point it out and guide you on how to fix it.
Language:
Dutch
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English
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French
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German
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Spanish
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
1. What types of books do you edit?
I edit fiction and non fiction including fantasy, thriller, memoir, crime story, and children’s books.
2. Will you change my writing style?
No. I refine your work without removing your voice. The goal is clarity and strength, not replacement.
3. Do you provide developmental feedback and proofreading together?
Yes. I look at structure and content first, then correct grammar and technical issues.
4. What format should I send my manuscript in?
Microsoft Word is preferred so I can track changes and leave comments clearly.
Reviews
21 reviews for this Gig
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S sophiesal1994
United Kingdom
I'm really impressed with the feedback. Ariandneve is the first person to read my book, and the notes provided were exceptional. Each chapter was clearly broken down with what worked well and what needed improvement, giving me a solid foundation with revisions. They also picked up on spelling mistakes...
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M maraz12345
Malta
The level of work is very good, would have expected more feedback in line with developmental editing, the editing was more of line editing. Also my manuscript formatting was changed. Despite the latter, the changes made are good and the manuscript is more flowing.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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Helpful?U unita13
Italy
This was our first collaboration. I have been satisfied so far with the work, and she delivered everything on time as promised.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?J 
jesuswins
United States
Ongoing collaborationExcellent work. Ariadne provided an incredibly thorough and thoughtful review of my manuscript. Her feedback was detailed, constructive, and actionable, while showing a clear understanding of my voice and the purpose of the book. She went far beyond my expectations. Highly recommended!
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?W 
walterecook3
United States
Ongoing collaborationMy second engagement and she keeps getting better. Others have said she feels more like a partner than a service provider and I couldn't agree more. This developmental review was fantastic. I am eager to throw more money at her!
$200-$400
Price
8 days
Duration
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Reviews
21 reviews for this Gig
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S sophiesal1994
United Kingdom
I'm really impressed with the feedback. Ariandneve is the first person to read my book, and the notes provided were exceptional. Each chapter was clearly broken down with what worked well and what needed improvement, giving me a solid foundation with revisions. They also picked up on spelling mistakes...
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M maraz12345
Malta
The level of work is very good, would have expected more feedback in line with developmental editing, the editing was more of line editing. Also my manuscript formatting was changed. Despite the latter, the changes made are good and the manuscript is more flowing.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?U unita13
Italy
This was our first collaboration. I have been satisfied so far with the work, and she delivered everything on time as promised.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?J jesuswins
United States
Ongoing collaborationExcellent work. Ariadne provided an incredibly thorough and thoughtful review of my manuscript. Her feedback was detailed, constructive, and actionable, while showing a clear understanding of my voice and the purpose of the book. She went far beyond my expectations. Highly recommended!
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?W walterecook3
United States
Ongoing collaborationMy second engagement and she keeps getting better. Others have said she feels more like a partner than a service provider and I couldn't agree more. This developmental review was fantastic. I am eager to throw more money at her!
$200-$400
Price
8 days
Duration
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