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I will developmental edit and proofread, fiction, non fiction, fantasy novel book edit
4.7
4.7
United States
I speak English, Arabic, Dutch, German, French, Spanish, Norwegian
182 orders completed
Gig Summary
Developmental book editor
My name is Ariadne Vesper, and I specialise in developmental editing, proofreading, and comprehensive book editing across a wide range of genres, including romance, memoirs, novels, Sci-fi, dark roman...
Buyers keep returning
Ariadneve has an exceptional number of repeat buyers
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
graceemma125
United States
She did an in-depth analysis of my manuscript! It was above and beyond my expectations. I felt like she understood what I was trying to write about. I will...
walterecook3
United States
Six engagements, six home runs. Lots of detailed and useful feedback. I'll steal a word from another user, Ariadne is a partner, vested in my success. I am...
jesuswins
United States
Excellent work. Ariadne provided an incredibly thorough and thoughtful review of my manuscript. Her feedback was detailed, constructive, and actionable, while...
walterecook3
United States
I've now had twelve orders with Ariadne which itself describes my level of satisfaction - initial reads, dev edit, line edit, formatting, cover work. She is my one-stop shop and I couldn't be happier.
About this Gig
I will developmental edit and proofread your fiction or non-fiction book with a focus on improving flow, structure, and readability while keeping your voice intact. I work with fantasy, thriller, memoir, crime story, and children's books.
What I offer:
- Clean, organized manuscript delivery
- Clear in-line suggestions to improve clarity and flow
- Proofreading for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and consistency
- Developmental editing for structure, pacing, plot, and character depth
- Feedback that helps you strengthen weak sections without losing your style
What you will get:
- Improved readability and stronger storytelling
- Careful attention to detail from start to finish
- Clear and honest feedback you can actually use
- A polished manuscript ready for publishing or submission
I treat every manuscript with focus and respect. If something is not working, I will point it out and guide you on how to fix it.
Language:
Dutch
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English
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French
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German
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Spanish
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
1. What types of books do you edit?
I edit fiction and non fiction including fantasy, thriller, memoir, crime story, and children’s books.
2. Will you change my writing style?
No. I refine your work without removing your voice. The goal is clarity and strength, not replacement.
3. Do you provide developmental feedback and proofreading together?
Yes. I look at structure and content first, then correct grammar and technical issues.
4. What format should I send my manuscript in?
Microsoft Word is preferred so I can track changes and leave comments clearly.
Reviews
43 reviews for this Gig
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graceemma125
United States
She did an in-depth analysis of my manuscript! It was above and beyond my expectations. I felt like she understood what I was trying to write about. I will implement all the suggestions she made! I would hire her again for any future writing projects.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?W 
walterecook3
United States
Ongoing collaborationSix engagements, six home runs. Lots of detailed and useful feedback. I'll steal a word from another user, Ariadne is a partner, vested in my success. I am eager to continue throwing money at her as we continue the journey.
$600-$800
Price
6 days
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jesuswins
United States
Ongoing collaborationExcellent work. Ariadne provided an incredibly thorough and thoughtful review of my manuscript. Her feedback was detailed, constructive, and actionable, while showing a clear understanding of my voice and the purpose of the book. She went far beyond my expectations. Highly recommended!
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
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Helpful?W walterecook3
United States
Ongoing collaborationI've now had twelve orders with Ariadne which itself describes my level of satisfaction - initial reads, dev edit, line edit, formatting, cover work. She is my one-stop shop and I couldn't be happier.
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
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Helpful?B bradygranier
United States
Very bad experience. Repeatedly didn't follow explanations about my manuscript. I basically got a grammar check and some feedback that appeared AI generated.
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
43 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
G graceemma125
United States
She did an in-depth analysis of my manuscript! It was above and beyond my expectations. I felt like she understood what I was trying to write about. I will implement all the suggestions she made! I would hire her again for any future writing projects.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?W walterecook3
United States
Ongoing collaborationSix engagements, six home runs. Lots of detailed and useful feedback. I'll steal a word from another user, Ariadne is a partner, vested in my success. I am eager to continue throwing money at her as we continue the journey.
$600-$800
Price
6 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?J jesuswins
United States
Ongoing collaborationExcellent work. Ariadne provided an incredibly thorough and thoughtful review of my manuscript. Her feedback was detailed, constructive, and actionable, while showing a clear understanding of my voice and the purpose of the book. She went far beyond my expectations. Highly recommended!
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?W walterecook3
United States
Ongoing collaborationI've now had twelve orders with Ariadne which itself describes my level of satisfaction - initial reads, dev edit, line edit, formatting, cover work. She is my one-stop shop and I couldn't be happier.
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?B bradygranier
United States
Very bad experience. Repeatedly didn't follow explanations about my manuscript. I basically got a grammar check and some feedback that appeared AI generated.
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
