I will provide a professional feature script diagnostic report

Are you preparing your feature screenplay or TV pilot for producers, competitions, or funding bodies?

I am a produced feature screenwriter (Wait for Me / Bad Faith), MA graduate, and BAFTA Connect member. I provide rigorous, production-grounded script diagnostics rather than academic theory or generic praise.

You don't need to pay for multi-page plot synopses or textbook jargon that simply proves a reader has read Save the Cat. You need to know where your script leaks dramatic momentum and how to fix it before putting it into the marketplace.

What Your Diagnostic Report Covers:

1. Premise & Narrative Engine: Assessing whether your central dramatic conflict sustains feature length.
2. Plot Mechanics & Logic: Diagnosing structural drag, arbitrary twists, and causal holes.
3. Character Agency: Ensuring your protagonist actively drives the story rather than passively observing it.
4. Dialogue & Practical Feasibility: Evaluating speakable subtext, pacing, and indie budget realities (cast size, locations, staging efficiency).
5. Priority Action Plan: A concrete list of fixes to tackle immediately in your next draft.

Delivered as a clear, actionable report. Please get in touch if you have any questions,