I will beta read your young adult, middle grade novel, and give honest feedback
Highly Skilled Pro Copy Editor, Proofreader and a Beta reader
About this Gig
Hello,
Writing is really important to me. I think every story should get helpful feedback to be the best it can be. If you need someone to look at your draft and give you ideas to make it better, or if you want to know what a Beta reader thinks of your work, or if you need a really detailed look at your manuscript, I am here to help with thoughtful and honest ideas that you can use.
What I Offer:
- Alpha Reading
- Beta Reading
- Manuscript Critique
- Honest Detailed Feedback
That feedback will answer questions such as:
- Do the characters seem real?
- Does the dialogue flow, or is it stilted?
- Is the conflict/resolution realistic?
- Is there something missing?
- Will this evoke an emotional response?
- Are these characters lovable?
And the most important question: Is this novel good?
What You Will Get From Me:
- A detailed report with my thoughts on your writing
- Notes written in your manuscript
- Feedback that is honest but also encouraging
My goal is to help you become a writer without changing what makes your writing special.
Let's work together to make your manuscript the best it can be because your words are important and deserve to be heard.
Let's get started!
Genre:
Children’s books
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Romance
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
How detailed will your feedback be on my manuscript?
You’ll receive in-depth, constructive feedback covering plot, pacing, characters, clarity, dialogue, and overall reader experience. I highlight strengths, weaknesses, and specific areas for improvement, so you know exactly what to fix before publishing or querying agents.
Will you give honest critique or just positive comments?
I provide honest, balanced critique. You’ll get both what’s working well and what isn’t, with clear explanations and practical suggestions. My goal is to help you improve your book, not just praise it.
Can you help me identify why readers may lose interest in my story?
Yes. I focus on pacing issues, confusing sections, weak hooks, plot holes, and character inconsistencies that cause readers to disengage. This helps you fix problem areas that might hurt reviews or sales later.
Is your beta reading suitable before I send my book to agents or publish it?
Absolutely. This beta reading and manuscript review service is ideal before submitting to agents, editors, or self-publishing. You’ll gain reader-focused insight to refine your manuscript and avoid costly mistakes.
Will my manuscript and ideas remain confidential?
Yes. Your work is treated with full confidentiality. I respect your intellectual property, and your manuscript will never be shared, reused, or discussed with anyone else.

