I will beta read your first chapter and provide detailed feedback

Worried your first chapter won't nail you an agent? Wondering if your story has the stellar opening it deserves?

Have no fear, your editor is here!

As a fresh set of eyes, I will comb through your first chapter and provide detailed feedback on your fantasy story, along with a reader's report.

But what's the difference between an alpha reader and a beta reader, you say? Easy answer: an alpha reader reviews your manuscript in its earliest, rougher states, whilst a beta reader acts as a test subject for the target audience and to catch smaller, last-minute errors and plot holes.

In each package, I will look at:

• Characters- Their introductions, personalities, and dialogue.
• Plot- The chapter's structure, feedback on the hook, and ensuring it flows exceptionally.
• Setting- Immersive worldbuilding, character interaction, and conquering info-dumping.

Please reach out with any questions, and I will respond as quickly as possible. I look forward to working with you!

-Bella Snow :D