I will do a one pass developmental edit and manuscript critique

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

282 orders completed

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Professional developmental editor with a BA (Honors) in Creative Writing & English. As a US Marine veteran, I bring elite discipline and a sharp analytical eye to every manuscript. Having critiqued hu...

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About this Gig

NOW BOOKING: AUG/SEP 2026. Contact me before ordering.


Get comprehensive, high-end developmental editing for your short or novel-length fiction to move you faster toward traditional or self-publishing. As an expert editor with a BA (Honors) in Creative Writing & English, I offer three tailored passes to ensure your manuscript shines:


  • BASIC: The Macro Beta Pass. Macro story experience, reader reactions averaging 1-2 comments per chapter, and a 3-page structural report evaluating your pacing, plot, and character arcs.


  • STANDARD: One-Pass Developmental Diagnostic. Deep-dive critique. Thousands of words of inline comments tracking worldbuilding logic, dialogue, POV shifts, pacing, and plot holes. A report of 5+ pages.


  • PREMIUM: Premium Dev. Edit & Style Polishing. The full package. Everything in Standard plus meticulous inline style editing, prose polishing, syntax tuning, market positioning, and sharp line rewrites.


I edit all age ranges, providing a professional manuscript critique for fantasy, science fiction, romance, crime, thriller, mystery, adventure, horror, historical, literary, upmarket, or YA manuscripts.


I want your fiction to shine. Let's get started!

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Children’s books

Horror/ thriller

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Narrative

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Reviews

224 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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  • Value of delivery
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    k_fosterauthor

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Writing a novel is tough, and getting the right beta reader is the difference between a project and a successful project. I'm consistently impressed with Chris' work product. He really goes above and beyond to give you feedback that is not only polite, but honest. His comments within the manuscript are...

    $400-$600

    Price

    2 months

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G

    gtw02126

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I've been working with Chris for about two years now, and he has never failed to deliver exceptional work. Whether it's little snippets here or there that show where or how a reader might react, or detailed comments that highlight the nuances of grammar or help with prose, his feedback is always great. He...

    $400-$600

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    summer50000

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Wonderful attention to detail and a great sense of what it takes to write fiction. Another reviewer might be able to find the flaws, but it takes a very special reviewer like Chris to help the author find a path forward and discover workable solutions. Chris is adept at the full range of editorial critiquing and development.

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K
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    khayn29

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Chris' report was great! He went above and beyond with his feedback. It was targeted and actionable. It gave me a lot to think about and how to fix my story. This is my second story that he has beta read and I will return with any other books I have.

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    daniel_w_storm

    HR

    Croatia

    5

    Fantastic experience. Chris provided sharp, actionable feedback on my crime thriller. His military background gave him a great eye for tactical details, and his editorial notes were spot on. Highly recommend him to any author looking for honest, professional feedback

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

224 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(221)
(0)
(3)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • K

    k_fosterauthor

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Writing a novel is tough, and getting the right beta reader is the difference between a project and a successful project. I'm consistently impressed with Chris' work product. He really goes above and beyond to give you feedback that is not only polite, but honest. His comments within the manuscript are...

    $400-$600

    Price

    2 months

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G

    gtw02126

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I've been working with Chris for about two years now, and he has never failed to deliver exceptional work. Whether it's little snippets here or there that show where or how a reader might react, or detailed comments that highlight the nuances of grammar or help with prose, his feedback is always great. He...

    $400-$600

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    summer50000

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Wonderful attention to detail and a great sense of what it takes to write fiction. Another reviewer might be able to find the flaws, but it takes a very special reviewer like Chris to help the author find a path forward and discover workable solutions. Chris is adept at the full range of editorial critiquing and development.

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K
    image-docs

    khayn29

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Chris' report was great! He went above and beyond with his feedback. It was targeted and actionable. It gave me a lot to think about and how to fix my story. This is my second story that he has beta read and I will return with any other books I have.

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    daniel_w_storm

    HR

    Croatia

    5

    Fantastic experience. Chris provided sharp, actionable feedback on my crime thriller. His military background gave him a great eye for tactical details, and his editorial notes were spot on. Highly recommend him to any author looking for honest, professional feedback

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No