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I will do a developmental edit on your novel or screenplay
Always prepared to do my best work!
I have been teaching for 20+ years in a primary school. I have an English degree - Honours level and TEFL certificate. I am an author. I write for adults and children. My adult books are Psychologica...
About this Gig
Worried that your manuscript is weak or not sure where your story is going?
"Deborah was so nice to work with. I had a lot of anxiety going into this whole editing thing, and never once did Deborah make me feel bad about my writing. She had so many kind words and was very pleasant to work with."
I will edit your work and leave detailed comments in the margins regarding character motivation, emotional impact, pacing, consistency, flow, style, clarity, dialogue & structure. Let's improve the overall content and structure of your manuscript together. I will also write a critique summarizing your work's strengths and weaknesses, and offer suggestions for improvement.
My strengths lie in Middle Grade & YA novels & Psychological thrillers/ horrors but I can work with any genre - fiction or non-fiction.
Please contact me prior for any custom word counts or special requirements.
This gig includes corrections of grammar and spelling errors. I will point out constant inconsistencies and filler words - and will ask you to correct these as you go. I will set homework for you as I edit too - so be prepared to work hard.
I am looking forward to meeting you and your work.
Genre:
Children’s books
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Horror/ thriller
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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P pbuffett
United States
She has a great talent for making stories more interesting and compelling. She is a true pro and a great storyteller!
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Helpful?1 person found this review helpful.M mzbbydino
Repeat Client
Guatemala
This is my second time working with this seller. Deborah is very responsive and really helped me to organize and polish my manuscript. I highly recommend!
Helpful?1 person found this review helpful.R 
roelerich
United States
Easy to work with, good edit suggestions, would work with again!
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Helpful?J jack_craig
Canada
It was a pleasure working with Deborah. She was easy to communicate with. Presented me with great ideas to improve my story and completed it in a timely manner. I'm looking forward to the next project with her.
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polkadotpolly
United States
Deborah was so nice to work with. I had a lot of anxiety going into this whole editing thing, and never once did Deborah make me feel bad about my writing. She had so many kind words and was very pleasant to work with. I hope to work with her again in the future!
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13 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Recommend to a friend
- Service as described
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Most relevant
P pbuffett
United States
She has a great talent for making stories more interesting and compelling. She is a true pro and a great storyteller!
D Seller's Response
Helpful?1 person found this review helpful.M mzbbydino
Repeat Client
Guatemala
This is my second time working with this seller. Deborah is very responsive and really helped me to organize and polish my manuscript. I highly recommend!
Helpful?1 person found this review helpful.R roelerich
United States
Easy to work with, good edit suggestions, would work with again!
D Seller's Response
Helpful?J jack_craig
Canada
It was a pleasure working with Deborah. She was easy to communicate with. Presented me with great ideas to improve my story and completed it in a timely manner. I'm looking forward to the next project with her.
D Seller's Response
Helpful?P polkadotpolly
United States
Deborah was so nice to work with. I had a lot of anxiety going into this whole editing thing, and never once did Deborah make me feel bad about my writing. She had so many kind words and was very pleasant to work with. I hope to work with her again in the future!
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