I’m a voracious beta reader who believes a great draft needs the right pair of eyes to take it to the next level. As an author of paranormal fantasy, I know how easily a story can lose its grip. When ...
I provide beta reads of your ready-to-publish novel. This will include a comprehensive reader report of the following elements:
Plot & Pacing: Identifies plot holes, confusing timelines, logic gaps, or areas where the story drags or moves too quickly.
Character Arcs: Evaluates if the protagonist's motivations make sense, if the dialogue feels natural, and if secondary characters feel distinct.
World-Building: Notes if the setting is immersive, clear, and consistent
Hook & Climax: Assesses whether the opening chapter successfully grabs attention and if the ending delivers a satisfying payoff.
Target Audience Fit: Feedback on whether the book matches the tropes, expectations, and tone of its specific genre.
I will also provide inline comments regarding my emotional reactions, confusing dialogue or prose, and notes on pacing so long as you provide a word document. Inline comments are not available for pdf documents.
You may provide up to four questions you would like me to directly answer.
What I will not do:
I will not proofread for spelling errors or punctuation errors.