I will editorially assess the first 50 pages of your memoir
Writer, Editor and Writing Coach, Former Attorney
About this Gig
Finished a first draft of your memoir and not sure what to do next? An editorial assessment is a terrific, affordable option, perfect for writers who are not yet ready to commit to a pricey developmental or substantive line edit.
My detailed manuscript report on your first pages will provide a big-picture, macro evaluation of structure, writing style, characterization, voice, clarity, tension and pacing, all with the aim of guiding you in revisions and preparing your manuscript for ultimate publication. My written feedback will indicate what's working, what's not but will not include in-document edits. Consider this a sophisticated, detailed beta read by an experienced, fast and affordable professional writer and editor.
While I'm new to Fiverr, I've got more than 30 years of experience as a writer and editor. As I'm building relationships here, take advantage of my temporary low prices.
Language:
English
Genre:
Memoir/ biography
Audience :
General readers
POV:
First person
Complexity level:
Intermediate
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is an editorial assessment?
I'll read your manuscript and provide a detailed editorial letter providing actionable feedback on big-picture elements like pacing, tone, character development, style, dialogue, etc.
How will I receive your work product?
My editorial assessment will arrive as a detailed, editorial letter giving you actionable suggestions for taking your manuscript to the next level. No in-document edits are provided.
What genres do you know best?
Thanks for asking! Memoir, book club and women's fiction, and romance. I'm not a good fit for fantasy or science fiction.
Is this a line edit?
No. In-document edits are not included in this editorial assessment. Line edits are for writers whose manuscripts are almost ready for publication. An editorial assessment is meant for a first or second draft.
Is this a developmental edit?
No. Developmental edits are quite pricey. However, an editorial assessment will give suggestions for big picture changes similar to a developmental edits but my feedback does not include in-document edits.
Are you a native English speaker?
Yes. I've lived in California my whole life. I have degrees from Stanford University, UC Berkeley and Loyola Law School.

