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I will developmental editing, proofreading for fantasy, children book, non fiction,
DEVELOPMENTAL BOOK EDITOR
I am Florence, a professional book editor with years of experience helping writers refine manuscripts into clear, well-structured books. I offer developmental editing, line editing, and proofreading t...
About this Gig
Hello and welcome. Im glad youre here. I work with writers who want more than surface-level corrections. I help shape manuscripts into clear, engaging, and well-structured stories that feel ready for readers and publishing.
Service:
- Developmental editing to improve story structure, pacing, plot flow, and character development
- Line editing to refine sentence flow, clarity, tone, and readability
- Grammar correction, repetition removal, and tightening of awkward phrasing
- Consistency check for voice, style, and narrative continuity
- Feedback notes to help you understand key strengths and areas to improve
Genres:
- Dark fantasy
- Fantasy and high fantasy
- Romantasy and romance fiction
- Science fiction
- Young adult fiction
- Memoir and personal narratives
Why choose me:
I approach every manuscript with care for both story and style. I dont just correct errors, I help you strengthen the foundation of your writing so it reads smoother and feels more intentional. I pay attention to pacing, emotional impact, and clarity while preserving your original voice.
My feedback is direct, practical, and easy to apply, so you know exactly how to improve your manuscript without confusion.
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FAQ
1. What do I need to send you before editing starts?
Please send your manuscript in a Word document or Google Doc. If you have any specific concerns or goals for your story, include them as well.
2. Do you change my writing style or voice?
No. I keep your original voice intact. My job is to improve clarity, structure, and flow while preserving how you naturally write.
3. What is the difference between developmental editing and line editing?
Developmental editing focuses on story structure, pacing, plot, and character development. Line editing focuses on sentence flow, clarity, grammar, and readability.
4. Do you edit all genres?
I specialize in dark fantasy, fantasy, romantasy, science fiction, romance, YA fiction, and memoir. These are the genres I understand best in terms of tone and structure.
5. Will I receive feedback or comments on my manuscript?
Yes. You will receive clear notes highlighting strengths, issues, and suggestions so you understand what was improved and what still needs attention.
