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Florence Tilly
@florencetilly
DEVELOPMENTAL BOOK EDITOR
United Kingdom
Spanish, Arabic, French, German
About me
My name is Florence Tilly, a professional book editor helping authors shape clear, engaging manuscripts while preserving their voice. I offer developmental editing, line editing, and proofreading. I refine structure, pacing, clarity, and flow, and correct grammar without losing style. I work across fiction and nonfiction, including romance, dark fantasy, and memoir. Expect honest feedback, clear communication, and practical edits that strengthen your work and prepare it for readers.
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Developmental Editing
I will proofread, non fiction, children book, fantasy novel, developmental book editor
Developmental Editing
I will proofread children book, memoir, dark romance, fantasy novel editor, self help
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camillakartal
Canada
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Exceptional Developmental Editing Experience Working with this editor was one of the best decisions I made for my manuscript. The developmental feedback went far beyond surface-level comments and provided a clear roadmap for improving the structure, pacing, and overall effectiveness of my book. Every...
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brianablack1
United States
Ongoing collaboration
Working with Florence was an incredible experience from start to finish. She provided thoughtful, detailed feedback that went far beyond correcting grammar and typos. Her comments helped me identify areas where I could strengthen pacing, improve clarity, reduce repetition, and make certain emotional...
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hartwellemily
Germany
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Exceptional editing service from start to finish. The developmental feedback was insightful, the line and copy edits were meticulous, and every suggestion strengthened the manuscript while preserving my unique voice and style. The editor identified structural weaknesses, refined pacing, enhanced character...
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deborah_sridhar
United Arab Emirates
Florence is an amazing editor and beta reader! I contacted her before I started working on my novel and not only was she patient as I wrote it, but she gave in-depth feedback chapter by chapter and identified 3 key development edits that would tighten my book and make it ready for querying. She also...
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hartwellemily
Germany
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Florence provided a detailed line edit of my manuscript. All changes were clearly tracked. Her edits improved grammar and clarity, while maintaining my voice. She was responsive and easy to communicate with. Victoria exceeded delivery deadlines. As a new author, I’m pleased with this experience and would highly recommend it.
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