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Florence Tilly
@florencetilly
DEVELOPMENTAL BOOK EDITOR
United Kingdom
Spanish, Arabic, French, German
About me
My name is Florence Tilly, a professional book editor helping authors shape clear, engaging manuscripts while preserving their voice. I offer developmental editing, line editing, and proofreading. I refine structure, pacing, clarity, and flow, and correct grammar without losing style. I work across fiction and nonfiction, including romance, dark fantasy, and memoir. Expect honest feedback, clear communication, and practical edits that strengthen your work and prepare it for readers.
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Developmental Editing
I will developmental editing, line editing, proofreading for children book, fantasy
Developmental Editing
I will proofread children book, memoir, dark romance, fantasy novel editor, self help
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camillakartal
Repeat Client
Canada
Exceptional Developmental Editing Experience Working with this editor was one of the best decisions I made for my manuscript. The developmental feedback went far beyond surface-level comments and provided a clear roadmap for improving the structure, pacing, and overall effectiveness of my book. Every...
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john_andrew218
Germany
Florence carefully reorganized scenes, strengthened the world-building flow, and helped balance the romance with the larger fantasy plot perfectly. The story feels far more cohesive now, and the pacing between action, emotion, and lore is much smoother. Her suggestions were smart, professional, and clearly...
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camillakartal
Repeat Client
Canada
The proofreading was great. Before starting my manuscript, I discovered that I had some typographical errors, and Florence helped me professionally with that. I highly recommend!
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seanclint
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
Outstanding experience working with this seller! They delivered a well-written 5-chapter ebook, “The Mystery of Ionak Village,” with an engaging mix of crime, suspense, and thriller elements. The formatting was professional, the storyline was captivating, and the book cover design perfectly matched the...
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odaniella
Repeat Client
Nigeria
Florence provides detailed developmental editing focused on strengthening plot structure, pacing, character arcs, world-building, emotional depth, and overall story consistency. The editing process is designed to shape the manuscript into a more immersive and engaging reading experience while preserving my unique voice and storytelling style.
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