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I will proofread, non fiction, children book, fantasy novel, developmental book editor
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DEVELOPMENTAL BOOK EDITOR
My name is Florence Tilly, a professional book editor helping authors shape clear, engaging manuscripts while preserving their voice. I offer developmental editing, line editing, and proofreading. I r...
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What people loved about this freelancer
hartwellemily
Germany
Exceptional editing service from start to finish. The developmental feedback was insightful, the line and copy edits were meticulous, and every suggestion strengthened...
john_andrew218
Germany
Florence carefully reorganized scenes, strengthened the world-building flow, and helped balance the romance with the larger fantasy plot perfectly. The story...
camillakartal
Canada
Exceptional Developmental Editing Experience Working with this editor was one of the best decisions I made for my manuscript. The developmental feedback went...
deborah_sridhar
United Arab Emirates
Florence is an amazing editor and beta reader! I contacted her before I started working on my novel and not only was she patient as I wrote it, but she gave...
About this Gig
Hello,I'm Florence Tilly, a professional book editor working with authors to turn early drafts into clear, structured, and readable manuscripts that feel ready for real readers, not just finished on paper.
My work focuses on improving the strength of your writing without flattening your voice. I pay attention to how your story moves, how your ideas connect, and how your sentences carry meaning. The aim is simple: make the writing easier to read, more consistent, and more engaging from start to finish.
My services include:
- Developmental book editing (structure, pacing, plot, clarity)
- Line editing (flow, tone, sentence strength)
- Copy editing (grammar, punctuation, consistency)
- Proofreading (final polish before publishing)
Genres I work with:
Fantasy, fiction, romance, self-help, cookbook, and general nonfiction.
Why work with me:
- Careful, detailed edits
- Clear and honest feedback
- Consistent tone and voice preservation
- Fast delivery and reliable communication
If you need a professional editor to refine your manuscript and prepare it for publishing, Im ready to help.
Language:
Arabic
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Dutch
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English
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French
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German
Voice:
Active
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FAQ
1. What editing services do you offer?
I offer developmental editing, line editing, copy editing, and proofreading to help improve structure, clarity, grammar, and overall flow of your manuscript.
2. What genres do you work with?
I work with fiction and nonfiction, including romance, fantasy, self-help, memoir, and cookbook manuscripts.
3. Will you change my writing style?
No. I focus on improving clarity and readability while keeping your original voice and writing style intact.
4. How do you handle large manuscripts?
I review manuscripts in a structured process, focusing on consistency, pacing, grammar, and readability across the entire document.
5. What will I receive after editing?
You will receive a clean, edited manuscript with tracked changes and comments where necessary, so you can see every improvement clearly.
Reviews
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hartwellemily
Germany
Ongoing collaborationExceptional editing service from start to finish. The developmental feedback was insightful, the line and copy edits were meticulous, and every suggestion strengthened the manuscript while preserving my unique voice and style. The editor identified structural weaknesses, refined pacing, enhanced character...
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
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john_andrew218
Germany
Florence carefully reorganized scenes, strengthened the world-building flow, and helped balance the romance with the larger fantasy plot perfectly. The story feels far more cohesive now, and the pacing between action, emotion, and lore is much smoother. Her suggestions were smart, professional, and clearly...
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?C 
camillakartal
Canada
Ongoing collaborationExceptional Developmental Editing Experience Working with this editor was one of the best decisions I made for my manuscript. The developmental feedback went far beyond surface-level comments and provided a clear roadmap for improving the structure, pacing, and overall effectiveness of my book. Every...
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?A alpha_s
United States
Florence has done an excellent job with ANA. I really appreciate her careful attention to detail and the depth of her analysis. She has looked beyond simple grammar and editing, paying close attention to character consistency, emotional impact, continuity, realism, and historical accuracy. Her thoughtful...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?D deborah_sridhar
United Arab Emirates
Florence is an amazing editor and beta reader! I contacted her before I started working on my novel and not only was she patient as I wrote it, but she gave in-depth feedback chapter by chapter and identified 3 key development edits that would tighten my book and make it ready for querying. She also...
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
33 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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H hartwellemily
Germany
Ongoing collaborationExceptional editing service from start to finish. The developmental feedback was insightful, the line and copy edits were meticulous, and every suggestion strengthened the manuscript while preserving my unique voice and style. The editor identified structural weaknesses, refined pacing, enhanced character...
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
F Seller's Response
Helpful?J john_andrew218
Germany
Florence carefully reorganized scenes, strengthened the world-building flow, and helped balance the romance with the larger fantasy plot perfectly. The story feels far more cohesive now, and the pacing between action, emotion, and lore is much smoother. Her suggestions were smart, professional, and clearly...
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?C camillakartal
Canada
Ongoing collaborationExceptional Developmental Editing Experience Working with this editor was one of the best decisions I made for my manuscript. The developmental feedback went far beyond surface-level comments and provided a clear roadmap for improving the structure, pacing, and overall effectiveness of my book. Every...
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?A alpha_s
United States
Florence has done an excellent job with ANA. I really appreciate her careful attention to detail and the depth of her analysis. She has looked beyond simple grammar and editing, paying close attention to character consistency, emotional impact, continuity, realism, and historical accuracy. Her thoughtful...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?D deborah_sridhar
United Arab Emirates
Florence is an amazing editor and beta reader! I contacted her before I started working on my novel and not only was she patient as I wrote it, but she gave in-depth feedback chapter by chapter and identified 3 key development edits that would tighten my book and make it ready for querying. She also...
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
