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I will edit personal statements, statement of purpose, college application essay, sop
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About this Gig
About me: I'm Jake, an editor and published cybersecurity researcher with a master's in software engineering. For over a decade, my academic career immersed me in the university admissions process, teaching me what it takes to make an admissions committee want you. This is why my clients have received offers from top-tier institutions, including Harvard, MIT, Cornell, Yale, Columbia, Imperial College London, and the University of Toronto.
Programs: While I work on everything from business to history to medicine, my engineering background ensures you receive specialized help for STEM programs, such as computer science, data science & analytics, cybersecurity, and machine learning & artificial intelligence, among others.
Process: My standard package (most popular) revitalizes your personal statement, statement of purpose, or college application essay in two steps:
- Reviewing your draft and providing targeted feedback.
- Performing in-depth edits to produce a tailored and persuasive essay that packs a punch.
Ready to impress? Place an order!
Note: I do not write fresh statements. This is an editing service.
Language:
English
Content type:
Personal statement
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Generic
Genre:
Education
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Science
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Technology
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Fiverr
Internet Software & Services
Proofed and edited content for the Fiverr website.
Oct 2022-Oct 2022
DSM
Nutrition
Collaborated with DSM's research team to edit several technical white papers on AI, 5G, and Internet of Things.
Sep 2021-Jan 2022
My Portfolio
FAQ
Do you use AI or ChatGPT?
No. I have never used generative AI to perform my services. Every edit in a delivered document is performed by myself.
What do you need to get started?
1. Your draft of the statement in a .doc or .docx (MS Word) format. 2. University's name, program name, and essay instructions with word limits. 3. Attach a CV/resume if it is prepared. 4. For essays to multiple universities, I will need point #2 for all of them.
What will I receive?
Edited versions of your statement: one with changes tracked, and another clean version for direct use.
Will you write me a new personal statement?
Unfortunately, no. This is against Fiverr's terms of service.
Do you guarantee admission?
A beautifully written statement can have a significant impact on the review process. While it can improve your odds of success, it does not guarantee that you will be admitted to the program. My goal is to maximize the difference your personal statement can make to your overall application.
Do you offer fast delivery?
Yes. The gig has 24/48 hour delivery (depending on the package) as a gig extra.
Do you write in American or British English?
I adjust language based on the region of the university you're applying to.
Do you edit other kinds of documents?
Yes! I have other gigs for general editing and proofreading, and technical white papers or business docs. You can see them on my profile (copy/paste the link to your address bar): https://www.fiverr.com/jakeproofread
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S stephendaoud
United States
After seeing my essay, Jake was honest and transparent because he wanted to make sure I wasn’t overpaying for the level of edits I needed. He clearly explained what his service could and couldn’t do, offered helpful referrals for additional work, and even issued a partial refund. I really appreciated...
$50-$100
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5 days
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ademolaadebambo
Nigeria
Jake brought life to my statement of purpose. He recommended including specific experiences and impacts from my CV that I hadn't thought of. His knowledge of my intended research area reassured me that I made the right choice in engaging his services.
$200-$400
Price
4 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?C carmin19
Repeat Client
United States
I worked with Jake on refining my PhD SoP for top-tier electrical engineering programs, and his guidance was invaluable. Unlike other editors who focus solely on grammar and flow, Jake helped me articulate the logical progression of my research trajectory in a way that genuinely resonated with what admissions...
$200-$400
Price
7 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?A aqualyu
Hong Kong
Jake is exceptional! He really helps to express my ideas in a clear and organized way, and I see what good English is supposed to be in his editing work. Also, he was so kind to help me with an urgent task and delivered in several hours. I especially appreciated how he communicated throughout the process...
$400-$600
Price
3 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?P 
paige_the_cool
Repeat Client
United States
Jake is the best! I reached out to him last minute with graduate school SOP and Personal History drafts that were far too long, too dense, and not clearly telling my story. He helped me streamline my ideas, sharpen my narrative, and highlight the most meaningful aspects of my academic and professional...
$200-$400
Price
8 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?
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204 reviews for this Gig
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S stephendaoud
United States
After seeing my essay, Jake was honest and transparent because he wanted to make sure I wasn’t overpaying for the level of edits I needed. He clearly explained what his service could and couldn’t do, offered helpful referrals for additional work, and even issued a partial refund. I really appreciated...
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?A ademolaadebambo
Nigeria
Jake brought life to my statement of purpose. He recommended including specific experiences and impacts from my CV that I hadn't thought of. His knowledge of my intended research area reassured me that I made the right choice in engaging his services.
$200-$400
Price
4 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?C carmin19
Repeat Client
United States
I worked with Jake on refining my PhD SoP for top-tier electrical engineering programs, and his guidance was invaluable. Unlike other editors who focus solely on grammar and flow, Jake helped me articulate the logical progression of my research trajectory in a way that genuinely resonated with what admissions...
$200-$400
Price
7 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?A aqualyu
Hong Kong
Jake is exceptional! He really helps to express my ideas in a clear and organized way, and I see what good English is supposed to be in his editing work. Also, he was so kind to help me with an urgent task and delivered in several hours. I especially appreciated how he communicated throughout the process...
$400-$600
Price
3 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?P paige_the_cool
Repeat Client
United States
Jake is the best! I reached out to him last minute with graduate school SOP and Personal History drafts that were far too long, too dense, and not clearly telling my story. He helped me streamline my ideas, sharpen my narrative, and highlight the most meaningful aspects of my academic and professional...
$200-$400
Price
8 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?
