I will beta read your story and provide constructive feedback

As a published author, U.S. Marine Corps combat veteran, and experienced technical researcher, I bring a unique perspective to beta reading.

I offer honest, constructive feedback on short stories, novellas, and full-length manuscripts, focusing on plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, and overall readability.

While I welcome all genres, I specialize in military fiction, hard science fiction, thrillers, and action-oriented stories, where my firsthand military experience and technical background provide additional insight into realism and authenticity.

My goal is simple: to help you improve your manuscript be exposing its strengths and flaws.