I will provide substantive edits for your novel
Freelance Editor, Author, Expert Storyteller
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banamaki

United States
It was an absolute pleasure working with Jessica. Her attention to detail is impeccable and she was very easy to communicate with and professional. Prompt response...
river_guthrie

United States
Jess did a phenomenal job editing my first book. The feedback was detailed, thoughtful, incredibly helpful, and improved the manuscript while still respecting...
sumdas23

United States
Absolute pleasure of working with Jess on my Cozy Murder series. She has an exceptional ability to spot “details-which-would-elevate-the-script.” I am still...
mrstevebarnett

United Kingdom
Jessie is a delight to work with. She puts her heart and acute mind into her work, and her comments hit the nail on the head, right where it needed to go. I...
About this Gig
Massive well done for completing your draft. It's a huge accomplishment! Now comes the scary part: sharing your work.
As an agented HarperCollins author and experienced professional editor with an MA in creative writing and several editing qualifications (see FAQs), I'm here to help you achieve your publishing dreams.
Whether you're hoping to sign with a literary agent, or you're looking to publish independently, you'll want your story to be impossible to put down.
I understand how important it is to trust someone with your novel. I'll be kind, constructive and honest as we work together to make your reader say 'Just one more page!'
Developmental edits - big-picture, substantive edits for plot, structure, character development, pacing, premise, motivation, writing technique, plot holes, stakes and goals, to really grip your reader.
Line edits - refining prose for rhythm, flow and conciseness, word choice, removing redundancies/repetition, voice consistency, detail accuracy, grammar, spelling & punctuation.
I'm a full member of the Editorial Freelancers Association.
Spaces fill up FAST, so please message first to check availability and to see if we'd be a good fit.
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FAQ
How will I receive my substantive edits?
I will mark up your Manuscript using tracked changes on a Microsoft Word document as well as providing full structural editorial notes for a developmental edit. For line and copy edits, I provide a 'clean' copy, with all changes made and comments removed.
Do you provide developmental edits/line and copy editing separately?
I do, but to save on cost, some writers request a comprehensive edit with all elements in the one round, so I offer this service on request.
What will the developmental edits entail?
Big-picture aspects, such as story and scene structure, character development, pacing, concept, stakes, motivation and goals, narrative technique, foreshadowing, believability, story flow - so all the story 'beats' are aligned. You will receive in-margin comments and a detailed editorial report.
What will the line edit aspect of the edit focus on?
Sentence structure and flow, the removal of redundancies and repetition, word choice, emotional temperature, voice consistency, POV issues and narrative distance, show not tell, clarity, and grammar, spelling and punctuation.
What qualifications and novel editing training have you undertaken?
Qualifications: MA in Creative Writing (Distinction) - CCCU Advanced Developmental Editing of Fiction - EFA Developmental Editing in Practice Copy-editing Fiction - EFA Editing the Romance - Club Ed Essential Grammar - The Publishing Training Centre Line Editing for Suspense - Louise Harnby
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B banamaki

United States
It was an absolute pleasure working with Jessica. Her attention to detail is impeccable and she was very easy to communicate with and professional. Prompt response times and delivery. She went above and beyond expectations and really helped polish up my manuscript. I highly recommend her services for...
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
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river_guthrie

United States
Jess did a phenomenal job editing my first book. The feedback was detailed, thoughtful, incredibly helpful, and improved the manuscript while still respecting my voice and vision for the story. I’m extremely happy with the work and would absolutely recommend her to other writers looking for a skilled and attentive editor.
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
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J 
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Helpful?S sumdas23

United States
Absolute pleasure of working with Jess on my Cozy Murder series. She has an exceptional ability to spot “details-which-would-elevate-the-script.” I am still in mid of implementing those changes, though painful, but I see the difference it is making: 1) The quality of the story in the script, 2) I as a debut writer and 3) overall journey.
$1,000-$1,500
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6 weeks
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J 
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Helpful?M mrstevebarnett

United Kingdom
Jessie is a delight to work with. She puts her heart and acute mind into her work, and her comments hit the nail on the head, right where it needed to go. I am very glad I trusted her with my baby. I mean book. Outstanding!
$1,000-$1,500
Price
6 weeks
Duration
J 
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Helpful?B bbustamante
Repeat Client

United States
Thanks, Jess! Really grateful for your feedback!
$1,000-$1,500
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5 weeks
Duration
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266 reviews for this Gig
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B banamaki

United States
It was an absolute pleasure working with Jessica. Her attention to detail is impeccable and she was very easy to communicate with and professional. Prompt response times and delivery. She went above and beyond expectations and really helped polish up my manuscript. I highly recommend her services for...
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?R 
river_guthrie

United States
Jess did a phenomenal job editing my first book. The feedback was detailed, thoughtful, incredibly helpful, and improved the manuscript while still respecting my voice and vision for the story. I’m extremely happy with the work and would absolutely recommend her to other writers looking for a skilled and attentive editor.
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?S sumdas23

United States
Absolute pleasure of working with Jess on my Cozy Murder series. She has an exceptional ability to spot “details-which-would-elevate-the-script.” I am still in mid of implementing those changes, though painful, but I see the difference it is making: 1) The quality of the story in the script, 2) I as a debut writer and 3) overall journey.
$1,000-$1,500
Price
6 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?M mrstevebarnett

United Kingdom
Jessie is a delight to work with. She puts her heart and acute mind into her work, and her comments hit the nail on the head, right where it needed to go. I am very glad I trusted her with my baby. I mean book. Outstanding!
$1,000-$1,500
Price
6 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?B bbustamante
Repeat Client

United States
Thanks, Jess! Really grateful for your feedback!
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?

