I will beta read your book and provide feedback

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English

17 orders completed

I'm an avid writer and reader with a burning passion for storytelling. Although a psychiatrist might call it an 'obsession.' My knowledge of character writing, world building, and story structure is m...

Level 1

Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.

About this Gig

Finally finished your rough draft? Congratulations! You've overcome the first major hurdle in the writing process!


Now it's time for the next leg of the journey: refining your work. Which means it's time for the scary part: getting feedback from others. That may sound nerve-racking, but don't worry! I'm here to help!


I will beta read your story and provide detailed, constructive, and encouraging feedback to help you find the best version of your book! My notes primarily focus on:


  • Character development
  • Worldbuilding
  • Plot progression
  • Dialogue


Also included is a general review of my general reading experience with your story. This will include more general thoughts, such as scenes I enjoyed, moments that confused me, and other more minor details.


Reading and writing has been my passion for as long as I can remember. Now, I aim to use my experience to help fuel yours!

Language:

English

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

16 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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(2)
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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    terranceacrow

    US

    United States

    5

    I feel like my public reviews are getting repetitive, but it's because Jonah H continues to delivery evaluations that are spot on. His insights help me see what succeeded and what could succeed with some minor changes, which is exactly what I hope for an alpha or a beta read. This one was no exception!

    Up to $50

    Price

    13 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    terranceacrow

    US

    United States

    5

    As always, Jonah H's feedback gave me a lot to think about! It helped me see where my prose succeeded and where it has yet to succeed. I very much appreciated the level of detail!

    Up to $50

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    terranceacrow

    US

    United States

    5

    The feedback identified some challenges in the plot, and it did so using specific examples. Jonah H even went the extra mile to provider literary examples of how other writers have approached the issues. This feedback will help me make the final produce much more appealing to readers.

    Up to $50

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D

    daniellegtanner

    US

    United States

    5

    I was nervous going into this interaction as it was all new to me. Jonah made the experience smooth and was honest but polite! The feedback that I received is going to be incredibly helpful in honing my book to where I want it to be. I fully plan on revisiting once I’ve made edits!

    Up to $50

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    bryceyarbrough9

    US

    United States

    4

    Done a good and swift job getting the job done

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

16 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(14)
(2)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • T

    terranceacrow

    US

    United States

    5

    I feel like my public reviews are getting repetitive, but it's because Jonah H continues to delivery evaluations that are spot on. His insights help me see what succeeded and what could succeed with some minor changes, which is exactly what I hope for an alpha or a beta read. This one was no exception!

    Up to $50

    Price

    13 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    terranceacrow

    US

    United States

    5

    As always, Jonah H's feedback gave me a lot to think about! It helped me see where my prose succeeded and where it has yet to succeed. I very much appreciated the level of detail!

    Up to $50

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    terranceacrow

    US

    United States

    5

    The feedback identified some challenges in the plot, and it did so using specific examples. Jonah H even went the extra mile to provider literary examples of how other writers have approached the issues. This feedback will help me make the final produce much more appealing to readers.

    Up to $50

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D

    daniellegtanner

    US

    United States

    5

    I was nervous going into this interaction as it was all new to me. Jonah made the experience smooth and was honest but polite! The feedback that I received is going to be incredibly helpful in honing my book to where I want it to be. I fully plan on revisiting once I’ve made edits!

    Up to $50

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    bryceyarbrough9

    US

    United States

    4

    Done a good and swift job getting the job done

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No