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I will beta read your book

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5.0

United States

I speak English

25 orders completed

I'm a book blogger and I love to read

Hey everyone! My name is Kaili and I'm a writer and reviewer. I have owned my own book blog (Owl Book World) for three years now so I'm the perfect candidate to get the reader's perspective (in a nic...
About this Gig

Whether you need constructive criticism or just an extra pair of eyes to help before you publish your work or submit it for publishing I'm here to help. I will provide honest and constructive feedback in a nice way along with it being done in a timely manner.


I have been a book blogger for 3 years now and have read a multitude of books by indie authors. I want to be able to help indie authors succeed and become the best writer that they can be.

I will provide feedback for:

  • Opening
  • Character development
  • dialogue
  • plot/pacing


Questions I'll ask while reading:

  • Did the story grip me from the very beginning? If not, why?
  • Were parts of the story confusing?
  • What did I think about the setting?
  • Are your characters authentic?
  • Does the story drag any at all?
  • Does the dialogue sound natural?


Why should you choose me?

  • I provide affordable service.
  • I make sure to give feedback in a timely manner.
  • I provide constructive criticism in a nice way.
  • As a book blogger and inspiring author, I want to see you succeed.


Genres I read:

  • Thriller
  • Horror
  • Contemporary
  • Fantasy

Age Range: Adult, YA, Middle Grade

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Language:

English

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Reviews

15 reviews for this Gig
5.0

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Rating Breakdown
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    5
  • Recommend to a friend
    4.9
  • Service as described
    4.9
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    starlarajav

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    United States

    5

    Thank you for the feedback.

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    tommylerin

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    Sweden

    5

    Thank you for your feedback

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    castanedawrites

    US

    United States

    5

    Kaili jumped in as a beta reader for the second book in my young adult supernatural series. Not an easy task as it was a) 90k words and b) had to work as a standalone novel. She caught several errors & oversights and suggested areas that needed clarification in a friendly, yet professional and efficient...

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    rhinodan

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    i have used her service twice now. I can't understand why she's not more in demand. The service was fast and superb. She's honest with her feedback. Still has a gentle touch. I wasn't scorched earth when she was done with me. I can't say enough as a writer her eyes are a excellent finding problems.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R
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    rhinodan

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Thank you I really appreciate the feedback and help on my MS. The feedback is invaluable to a writer. Kali service is rare not many women want to read dark or horror. She asked good questions which show me where the book fail to communicate.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

15 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(14)
(1)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Recommend to a friend
    4.9
  • Service as described
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • S

    starlarajav

    US

    United States

    5

    Thank you for the feedback.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    tommylerin

    SE

    Sweden

    5

    Thank you for your feedback

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    castanedawrites

    US

    United States

    5

    Kaili jumped in as a beta reader for the second book in my young adult supernatural series. Not an easy task as it was a) 90k words and b) had to work as a standalone novel. She caught several errors & oversights and suggested areas that needed clarification in a friendly, yet professional and efficient...

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R
    image-docs

    rhinodan

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    i have used her service twice now. I can't understand why she's not more in demand. The service was fast and superb. She's honest with her feedback. Still has a gentle touch. I wasn't scorched earth when she was done with me. I can't say enough as a writer her eyes are a excellent finding problems.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R
    image-docs

    rhinodan

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Thank you I really appreciate the feedback and help on my MS. The feedback is invaluable to a writer. Kali service is rare not many women want to read dark or horror. She asked good questions which show me where the book fail to communicate.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No