I will evaluate and structurally assess your prologue

Will your prologue hook your reader or get instant agent rejections?

In traditional publishing, prologues are a touchy subject. They're great, if they're well done. How do you know if yours is working?

As a working literary agent, professional freelance editor, and top-rated, vetted Fiverr Pro seller, I'll provide a diagnostic check of your prologue to determine whether it's captivating or it's holding your manuscript back.

This gig evaluates necessity and purpose, the hook and pacing, info-dumping vs exposition, and voice and tone continuity. You'll receive a comprehensive, actionable editorial summary that analyzes the structural mechanics and narrative tension and provides specific recommendations for elevating it, if and as needed.

Please note: this is a high-level structural assessment; no line-level edits are included.

If you're unsure whether your prologue is working, select a package or message me to get started!