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I will beta read your fiction book and provide honest feedback

Brazil

I speak English, Portuguese, Spanish

An organized mind simplifies the chaos

Hi, I'm Lays! I am a dedicated bilingual professional specializing in language services, data organization, and project support. I combine a sharp analytical mind with deep cultural communication ski...
About this Gig

Need a fresh, objective set of eyes on your manuscript? I am here to help you refine your story.

As an avid reader of fiction and world-building narratives, I will provide constructive, honest, and detailed feedback on your manuscript. I focus on helping you see your story through the reader's eyes so you can publish with confidence.


What I analyze in my feedback report:

  • Pacing & Plot: Does the story flow smoothly? Are there any plot holes or slow chapters?
  • Character Development: Are your characters relatable, consistent, and driven by clear motivations?
  • World-Building & Magic Systems: Is the environment immersive and structurally logical?
  • Reader Engagement: First impressions, emotional impact, and overall readability.


What you receive: A comprehensive reader report detailing my thoughts, highlights of what worked brilliantly, and constructive suggestions for areas that need a push.


I accept manuscripts in both English and Portuguese. Please message me with your genre and word count for a custom quote on full-length novels!


Genre:

Adventure

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Mystery

Romance

Language:

English

Portuguese

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