I will developmental edit, proofread and critique your manuscript

United States

I speak German, Spanish, French, English

2 orders completed

Detailed Honest Beta reading in progress

Hi, I’m Mary Harris, a professional beta reader with a sharp eye for story flow, emotional depth, and reader engagement. I specialize in dark romance fantasy, psychological thrillers, memoirs, novel s...
About this Gig

Welcome to my Gig.


You've spent weeks maybe months writing your manuscript, but something still feels off.


The story isn't flowing the way you imagined, readers get confused in certain parts, or the writing just doesn't hit as strongly as it should, and you don't want to publish something that's not your best work.


That's where I come in.


I will carefully developmental edit, proofread, and critique your manuscript to help you turn it into a polished, engaging, and reader-ready piece. I don't just fix grammar, I look at the heart of your story. Plot gaps, pacing issues, weak character development, repetitive phrasing, and unclear sections, I'll point them out and guide you on how to improve them.


You'll receive honest, constructive feedback written in simple, clear language you can actually use.


I work with care because I understand how personal your writing is, and I treat it like it matters.


If you're ready to stop second-guessing your manuscript and finally feel confident about your work, go ahead and place your order.


Lets make your story stronger.

Thanks!

Language:

English

French

German

Greek

Japanese

Genre:

Children’s books

Cookbooks/ recipes

Horror/ thriller

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Advanced

Voice:

Narrative

Delivery style preference

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