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Mary Show
@mary_showit
Level 2
READING AND EDITING IS IN MY DNA
United States
English, Dutch, French, Spanish
About me
I’m Mary, a college English literature teacher, writer, book editor, beta reader, and coach helping authors and aspiring writers worldwide. I specialize in guiding talented writers toward producing publish-ready, bestselling-quality manuscripts. I’m a Bonafide member of Western Oregon and CIEP. Are you looking to turn your rough draft into something truly worth reading? Contact me today for professional editing and beta reading services.
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Beta Reading
I will alpha or beta read fantasy fiction novel thriller scific mystery romance book
Line Editing
I will proofread and edit, format fiction novel, developmental book editor, memoir
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lrz572eak2m
United States
Ongoing collaboration
I was looking for someone to alpha-read the first part of a new story, and I’m so happy I found Mary Show. She read my opening chapters and gave me excellent ideas for how to improve. It was also very helpful to know what was working well. Now I can use these notes to revise and improve. Many thanks...
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elle_myren
United States
Mary had thoughts about trimming some longer internal musings/reflections to not interrupt the actions. It's something that I need to do on all my chapters it was just repeated, in nearly the exact same phrasing, for each chapter reflection. I would have like slightly more targeted feedback with specific...
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mami_iko
United Kingdom
I am very glad that I contacted Mary for the review of the first to chapters of the book I am writing. Her feedback was excellent, she helped me understand what is working well and what needed to be changed/improved. I will continue working with her for the rest of the book. Thank you.
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teenasloan
United States
Ongoing collaboration
Exceptional Beta Reader — Highly Recommend I was genuinely amazed by the amount of care and attention she put into beta reading my manuscript. She didn’t simply tell me whether she liked the story—she gave me thoughtful, detailed feedback on every chapter and the epilogue, covering pacing, character...
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robertwill010
United States
The editing was done five days early definitely above expectations. The editing was done professionally and attention to detail was 100% there. I highly recommend this editor. 🪐 10/10 will be using this service again.
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