I will alpha read your story

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

278 orders completed

Gig Summary

Expert Developmental Editor

My name is Michelle and I write middle-grade fantasy books. I just finished my first book Alex Murphy and the Golden Ram. When I am not writing, I am an avid reader, book blogger, bookstagrammer, book...

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

About this Gig

Are you a brand new writer, and need help finding someone to read your less-than-perfect manuscript? Have you finished a few chapters and want to make sure your story is headed in the right direction? Are you just lost in your story and need a second pair of eyes?


 I can help. I will quickly provide a low-cost critique of your short story or novel. I love to read books of all kinds--any genre or level of completion. 


I accept all manuscripts--whether it's a short story, a few chapters, or a sweeping epic fantasy. This listing is for anyone looking for an alpha reader, which means your manuscript can be a hot mess. An alpha reader is the first person you show your story to, even before an editor. 


Please do not hesitate to send me a less than perfectly edited manuscript. (This service does not include editing, but I will give you a heads up when I notice typos.) 


 I will read it and tell you what I loved and what I didn't love quite as much. If you are looking for a harsh or brutal reader, that is not me. I strive to provide gentle but honest criticism that will motivate you to continue your writing journey. Let me know how I can help you. 

Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Children’s books

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Literary fiction

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Romance

Language:

English

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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Reviews

62 reviews for this Gig
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    5
  • Quality of delivery
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  • Value of delivery
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    chrisdepano88

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Michelle kept her feedback very balanced between positive and constructive comments. I will definitely take her advice into consideration for the re-write.

    $50-$100

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    bluek83

    US

    United States

    5

    Michelle was wonderful to work with. She was personable and easy to communicate with, and her feedback was honest and thoughtful.

    $100-$200

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • L

    lottieauthor

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Fantastic beta reader! Highly recommend. Excellent experience.

    $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • P

    pdm2000

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Very good review of my novel, useful and helpful. Examined various aspects of the story such as plot elements, characters, dialogue, motivations, pacing, conflicts, stakes, and many other elements. Pointed out places where things could be improved and where things weren't clear. Also provided some inline...

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    mvhoang99

    US

    United States

    5

    Michelle's feedback was wonderful. She delivered everything in such a timely manner, and she provided a good balance between praise and constructive criticism. She really understood the characters and their motivations, which made the feedback more robust. I would 100% come back to Michelle! :)

    $100-$200

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

62 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(62)
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(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • C

    chrisdepano88

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Michelle kept her feedback very balanced between positive and constructive comments. I will definitely take her advice into consideration for the re-write.

    $50-$100

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    bluek83

    US

    United States

    5

    Michelle was wonderful to work with. She was personable and easy to communicate with, and her feedback was honest and thoughtful.

    $100-$200

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • L

    lottieauthor

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Fantastic beta reader! Highly recommend. Excellent experience.

    $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • P

    pdm2000

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Very good review of my novel, useful and helpful. Examined various aspects of the story such as plot elements, characters, dialogue, motivations, pacing, conflicts, stakes, and many other elements. Pointed out places where things could be improved and where things weren't clear. Also provided some inline...

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    mvhoang99

    US

    United States

    5

    Michelle's feedback was wonderful. She delivered everything in such a timely manner, and she provided a good balance between praise and constructive criticism. She really understood the characters and their motivations, which made the feedback more robust. I would 100% come back to Michelle! :)

    $100-$200

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No