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Expert Developmental Editor
My name is Michelle and I write middle-grade fantasy books. I just finished my first book Alex Murphy and the Golden Ram. When I am not writing, I am an avid reader, book blogger, bookstagrammer, book...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
pdm2000
Canada
Very good review of my novel, useful and helpful. Examined various aspects of the story such as plot elements, characters, dialogue, motivations, pacing, conflicts,...
vanripper
United States
Michelle provided an absolutely stellar alpha reader report for my novel! Her feedback was incredibly thorough, insightful, and hit the exact balance of encouragement...
individ_author
United States
The review I got as an alpha reading was exceptional. I've read through the comments and I'm able to shape now how I think I should go about my novel! I appreciate the timeliness of the work and the quality itself.
mvhoang99
United States
Michelle's feedback was wonderful. She delivered everything in such a timely manner, and she provided a good balance between praise and constructive criticism....
About this Gig
Are you a brand new writer, and need help finding someone to read your less-than-perfect manuscript? Have you finished a few chapters and want to make sure your story is headed in the right direction? Are you just lost in your story and need a second pair of eyes?
I can help. I will quickly provide a low-cost critique of your short story or novel. I love to read books of all kinds--any genre or level of completion.
I accept all manuscripts--whether it's a short story, a few chapters, or a sweeping epic fantasy. This listing is for anyone looking for an alpha reader, which means your manuscript can be a hot mess. An alpha reader is the first person you show your story to, even before an editor.
Please do not hesitate to send me a less than perfectly edited manuscript. (This service does not include editing, but I will give you a heads up when I notice typos.)
I will read it and tell you what I loved and what I didn't love quite as much. If you are looking for a harsh or brutal reader, that is not me. I strive to provide gentle but honest criticism that will motivate you to continue your writing journey. Let me know how I can help you.
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P pdm2000
Canada
Very good review of my novel, useful and helpful. Examined various aspects of the story such as plot elements, characters, dialogue, motivations, pacing, conflicts, stakes, and many other elements. Pointed out places where things could be improved and where things weren't clear. Also provided some inline...
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?V 
vanripper
United States
Michelle provided an absolutely stellar alpha reader report for my novel! Her feedback was incredibly thorough, insightful, and hit the exact balance of encouragement and constructive critique that every writer hopes for. She truly understood the emotional depth and nuances of my characters, and her...
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?I individ_author
United States
The review I got as an alpha reading was exceptional. I've read through the comments and I'm able to shape now how I think I should go about my novel! I appreciate the timeliness of the work and the quality itself.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?M mvhoang99
United States
Michelle's feedback was wonderful. She delivered everything in such a timely manner, and she provided a good balance between praise and constructive criticism. She really understood the characters and their motivations, which made the feedback more robust. I would 100% come back to Michelle! :)
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?C chung_lee77
United States
Told me exactly what I needed to know!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
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P pdm2000
Canada
Very good review of my novel, useful and helpful. Examined various aspects of the story such as plot elements, characters, dialogue, motivations, pacing, conflicts, stakes, and many other elements. Pointed out places where things could be improved and where things weren't clear. Also provided some inline...
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?V vanripper
United States
Michelle provided an absolutely stellar alpha reader report for my novel! Her feedback was incredibly thorough, insightful, and hit the exact balance of encouragement and constructive critique that every writer hopes for. She truly understood the emotional depth and nuances of my characters, and her...
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?I individ_author
United States
The review I got as an alpha reading was exceptional. I've read through the comments and I'm able to shape now how I think I should go about my novel! I appreciate the timeliness of the work and the quality itself.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?M mvhoang99
United States
Michelle's feedback was wonderful. She delivered everything in such a timely manner, and she provided a good balance between praise and constructive criticism. She really understood the characters and their motivations, which made the feedback more robust. I would 100% come back to Michelle! :)
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?C chung_lee77
United States
Told me exactly what I needed to know!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
