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Gig Summary
Romance Developmental Editing
Hello! I'm an avid reader, writer, and beta reader with experience providing feedback and developmental edits in a wide range of genres, including fantasy, romance, YA, and fanfiction (among many othe...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
cm_havencraft
United States
Millie was very helpful in writing a little report that covered my characters, plot, pacing, writing style, and general experience with my book's plot. It gave...
gummybear8
United States
Great beta reader with insightful and helpful comments. I loved the honesty on what was working and what wasn't working. Will be back for my next manuscript. Thank you!
havencap
United States
Millie was a pleasure to work with and I’m so glad we got to work together on my second project! I look forward to working together again
verityvideoads
Australia
Thank you for reading, for your comments and personal reactions (especially your reactions :) ) My client loved your report. There were many elements in her...
sj_crawford
Canada
This was my second time working with Millie. She provided exceptionally detailed, genre-appropriate comments, as well as a comprehensive reader report. The...
About this Gig
Romance Authors, Need a Fresh Perspective?
You've written a love story, but now you're wondering how to make it truly swoon-worthy. Let me help you polish your romance into a masterpiece readers wont forget.
What I Offer:
- Plot: Does the romance flow? Are twists believable?
- Characters: Are your lovers compelling and relatable?
- Pacing: Does the love story build naturally?
- Setting: Is the world immersive and enhances the romance?
- Writing style: Does your voice capture the emotions of love?
Bonus: My honest (and meme-filled!) reactions as I experience your story, because feedback can be fun too!
Note: I focus on big-picture feedback. No line-editing, proofreading, or copy-writing.
Lets work together to bring your story to life!
Contact me before purchasing to discuss your project.
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
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Spanish
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89 reviews for this Gig
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C cm_havencraft
United States
Millie was very helpful in writing a little report that covered my characters, plot, pacing, writing style, and general experience with my book's plot. It gave me a lot to think about, and of course, she did so rather swiftly, considering the size of the book. I will be coming back!
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?G 
gummybear8
United States
Great beta reader with insightful and helpful comments. I loved the honesty on what was working and what wasn't working. Will be back for my next manuscript. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?H havencap
Repeat Client
United States
Millie was a pleasure to work with and I’m so glad we got to work together on my second project! I look forward to working together again
Up to $50
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?V 
verityvideoads
Australia
Thank you for reading, for your comments and personal reactions (especially your reactions :) ) My client loved your report. There were many elements in her book she wasn't sure about and needed a critique. So she's very encouraged by your feedback and feel she's ready to do the final version and then publish it.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?S sj_crawford
Repeat Client
Canada
This was my second time working with Millie. She provided exceptionally detailed, genre-appropriate comments, as well as a comprehensive reader report. The feedback was beyond expectations, and was incredibly useful for my writing. I would recommend Millie for beta reading and will definitely return for future projects.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
89 reviews for this Gig
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| (3) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
C cm_havencraft
United States
Millie was very helpful in writing a little report that covered my characters, plot, pacing, writing style, and general experience with my book's plot. It gave me a lot to think about, and of course, she did so rather swiftly, considering the size of the book. I will be coming back!
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?G gummybear8
United States
Great beta reader with insightful and helpful comments. I loved the honesty on what was working and what wasn't working. Will be back for my next manuscript. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?H havencap
Repeat Client
United States
Millie was a pleasure to work with and I’m so glad we got to work together on my second project! I look forward to working together again
Up to $50
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?V verityvideoads
Australia
Thank you for reading, for your comments and personal reactions (especially your reactions :) ) My client loved your report. There were many elements in her book she wasn't sure about and needed a critique. So she's very encouraged by your feedback and feel she's ready to do the final version and then publish it.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?S sj_crawford
Repeat Client
Canada
This was my second time working with Millie. She provided exceptionally detailed, genre-appropriate comments, as well as a comprehensive reader report. The feedback was beyond expectations, and was incredibly useful for my writing. I would recommend Millie for beta reading and will definitely return for future projects.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
