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Romance Developmental Editing
Hello! I'm an avid reader, writer, and beta reader with experience providing feedback and developmental edits in a wide range of genres, including fantasy, romance, YA, and fanfiction (among many othe...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
cm_havencraft
United States
Millie was very helpful in writing a little report that covered my characters, plot, pacing, writing style, and general experience with my book's plot. It gave...
rss_spacecase
United States
The review was very good and helped me see where my writing needs improvement, especially since I kept it on the shorter side so that I can bolster it. Highly...
marcellusrivera
United States
Great notations that helps give me the perspective of the reader. This lets me know what they like or expect in the story and most importantly; what is disappointing...
irena_brox
United States
Millie did a great job with my review and at a pretty short period of time. Given my word count of 137K, she was able to complete it in only 8 days. I would recommend her to anyone for a beta read. ☺️
ellamae04
United States
AMAZING! I adore working with Millie to the highest extent. Her report is clear and helpful, and she answered down every question I had! 12/10 work as always and I can't wait to work with her again!
About this Gig
Romance Authors, Need a Fresh Perspective?
You've written a love story, but now you're wondering how to make it truly swoon-worthy. Let me help you polish your romance into a masterpiece readers wont forget.
What I Offer:
- Plot: Does the romance flow? Are twists believable?
- Characters: Are your lovers compelling and relatable?
- Pacing: Does the love story build naturally?
- Setting: Is the world immersive and enhances the romance?
- Writing style: Does your voice capture the emotions of love?
Bonus: My honest (and meme-filled!) reactions as I experience your story, because feedback can be fun too!
Note: I focus on big-picture feedback. No line-editing, proofreading, or copy-writing.
Lets work together to bring your story to life!
Contact me before purchasing to discuss your project.
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
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Spanish
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84 reviews for this Gig
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C cm_havencraft
United States
Millie was very helpful in writing a little report that covered my characters, plot, pacing, writing style, and general experience with my book's plot. It gave me a lot to think about, and of course, she did so rather swiftly, considering the size of the book. I will be coming back!
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?R 
rss_spacecase
United States
The review was very good and helped me see where my writing needs improvement, especially since I kept it on the shorter side so that I can bolster it. Highly recommend for alpha drafts, as they point out what you can and can't see.
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?M 
marcellusrivera
Repeat Client
United States
Great notations that helps give me the perspective of the reader. This lets me know what they like or expect in the story and most importantly; what is disappointing or needs to be worked on. Would recommend their service, was nice working with them.
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?I irena_brox
United States
Millie did a great job with my review and at a pretty short period of time. Given my word count of 137K, she was able to complete it in only 8 days. I would recommend her to anyone for a beta read. ☺️
Up to $50
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?E 
ellamae04
Repeat Client
United States
AMAZING! I adore working with Millie to the highest extent. Her report is clear and helpful, and she answered down every question I had! 12/10 work as always and I can't wait to work with her again!
Up to $50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
84 reviews for this Gig
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| (3) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
C cm_havencraft
United States
Millie was very helpful in writing a little report that covered my characters, plot, pacing, writing style, and general experience with my book's plot. It gave me a lot to think about, and of course, she did so rather swiftly, considering the size of the book. I will be coming back!
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?R rss_spacecase
United States
The review was very good and helped me see where my writing needs improvement, especially since I kept it on the shorter side so that I can bolster it. Highly recommend for alpha drafts, as they point out what you can and can't see.
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?M marcellusrivera
Repeat Client
United States
Great notations that helps give me the perspective of the reader. This lets me know what they like or expect in the story and most importantly; what is disappointing or needs to be worked on. Would recommend their service, was nice working with them.
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?I irena_brox
United States
Millie did a great job with my review and at a pretty short period of time. Given my word count of 137K, she was able to complete it in only 8 days. I would recommend her to anyone for a beta read. ☺️
Up to $50
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?E ellamae04
Repeat Client
United States
AMAZING! I adore working with Millie to the highest extent. Her report is clear and helpful, and she answered down every question I had! 12/10 work as always and I can't wait to work with her again!
Up to $50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
