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This is an edit focused on the book's big picture. I will not give you line-by-line feedback, but I will make in-line notes and comments about my reactions and questions. At the end of the draft, I will give you a readers report, which is a critical reading of the work. This will address acute and chronic tension (what I see is happening in the story), themes, character development, and any suggestions for improvement. For this service, I provide a free 1,000-word review so you can determine whether this is the right choice for you.