I will beta read critique novel, romance beta reader, beta reader fantasy, alpha reader

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English, Italian, French

4 orders completed

Dedicated Editor Helping Authors Publish with Confidence

I’m a passionate editor and publishing support specialist dedicated to helping authors turn ideas into polished, publication ready books. I provide in depth alpha and beta reading, along with construc...

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About this Gig

Beta reader, novel critique, romance beta reader, fantasy beta reader, manuscript review, alpha reader, book feedback, fiction critique


Is your story engaging enough for real readers? Are you unsure if your pacing, characters or plot are truly working?


Im Naomi, a beta reader and alpha reader who helps writers understand how their story feels from a readers perspective. I focus on what actually keeps readers hooked or causes them to lose interest.


I will carefully read your manuscript and give clear, honest and useful feedback to help you improve your story before publishing.


WHAT I REVIEW:

  • Story structure and plot clarity
  • Character depth and development
  • Dialogue and realism
  • Pacing and flow
  • Emotional impact and engagement
  • Reader experience and confusion points


If you're ready to improve your story with honest reader feedback, I'm here to help. Inbox Me Now

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Humor/ entertainment

Mystery

Romance

Language:

English

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Reviews

4 reviews for this Gig
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    United Kingdom

    5

    Honestly, I didn’t think I needed this service at first, but it proved me wrong. The feedback was really helpful and opened my eyes to things I hadn’t noticed. Very nice to work with as well communication was smooth throughout.

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    samuelfxea

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Naomi gave me everything I needed to improve my book. She even identified inconsistencies I didn't expect or notice myself. Her feedback was detailed, honest and easy to apply. My manuscript is much stronger because of her help.

    Up to $50

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    samuelfxea

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I wasn't sure what to expect, but this helped more than I thought. A lot of things were pointed out that I completely missed. Highly recommended 10/10.

    Up to $50

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    preciousemek689

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    I had a great experience working with Naomi. She gave me everything I needed to improve my book, with really helpful feedback and suggestions from start to finish.

    Up to $50

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

4 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(4)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • F
    image-docs

    fenella_p

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Honestly, I didn’t think I needed this service at first, but it proved me wrong. The feedback was really helpful and opened my eyes to things I hadn’t noticed. Very nice to work with as well communication was smooth throughout.

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    samuelfxea

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Naomi gave me everything I needed to improve my book. She even identified inconsistencies I didn't expect or notice myself. Her feedback was detailed, honest and easy to apply. My manuscript is much stronger because of her help.

    Up to $50

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    samuelfxea

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I wasn't sure what to expect, but this helped more than I thought. A lot of things were pointed out that I completely missed. Highly recommended 10/10.

    Up to $50

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • P
    image-docs

    preciousemek689

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    I had a great experience working with Naomi. She gave me everything I needed to improve my book, with really helpful feedback and suggestions from start to finish.

    Up to $50

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No