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I will developmental editing, line editing, proofreading for fantasy, romance, children
Professional Book Editor and Proofreader
I’m Naomi, a professional book editor and proofreader helping authors turn manuscripts into polished, engaging, reader-ready books. I work across fiction, nonfiction, romance, fantasy, mystery, thrill...
What people loved about this freelancer
fenella_p
United Kingdom
Honestly, I didn’t think I needed this service at first, but it proved me wrong. The feedback was really helpful and opened my eyes to things I hadn’t noticed....
samuelfxea
United States
Naomi gave me everything I needed to improve my book. She even identified inconsistencies I didn't expect or notice myself. Her feedback was detailed, honest...
samuelfxea
United States
I wasn't sure what to expect, but this helped more than I thought. A lot of things were pointed out that I completely missed. Highly recommended 10/10.
About this Gig
Fantasy Book Editor, Romance Book Editor, and Childrens Book Proofreader for Authors Preparing Manuscripts for Publication.
Does your manuscript have a strong story, but still feel like something is missing before you publish?
I help authors refine their manuscripts into polished, engaging books while preserving their unique voice, style, and vision. I focus on story structure, pacing, character development, sentence flow, clarity, grammar, punctuation, and consistency to create a stronger reading experience.
What I Offer:
Developmental Editing
Story structure, pacing, plot, character development, and constructive manuscript feedback.
Line Editing
Sentence clarity, flow, tone, readability, and consistency.
Proofreading
Grammar, spelling, punctuation, typos, and final quality checks.
What You Receive:
- Careful manual review
- Track Changes and comments
- Clear, constructive feedback
- Professional and confidential service
Send me your word count and manuscript details, and Ill help you choose the right service. Order Now and take the next step toward a polished, publication-ready manuscript.
Language:
Dutch
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English
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German
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Greek
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Italian
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What does your book editing service include?
Depending on the package, I can review story structure, pacing, character development, sentence flow, clarity, grammar, punctuation, spelling, and consistency.
Do you provide developmental editing?
Yes. Developmental editing can cover plot, pacing, story structure, character development, chapter flow, and overall reader experience.
Can you edit fantasy and romance novels?
Yes. I work with fantasy and romance manuscripts and focus on story flow, character consistency, readability, dialogue, pacing, and clarity while respecting your writing style.
Do you work on children’s books?
Yes. I can proofread and refine children’s book manuscripts for grammar, spelling, punctuation, clarity, consistency, and age-appropriate readability.
Will you change my unique writing voice?
No. Your voice and creative vision are important. I make thoughtful improvements while keeping your individual writing style intact.
What file format should I provide?
Microsoft Word (.doc or .docx) is preferred because it allows me to provide Track Changes and editorial comments efficiently.
Can you work with a large manuscript?
Yes. Please send your word count, genre, and manuscript details so I can recommend the appropriate package or create a custom offer.
Can I contact you with questions?
Absolutely. Send me your manuscript details and requirements, and I’ll help you determine the most suitable service for your project.
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fenella_p
United Kingdom
Honestly, I didn’t think I needed this service at first, but it proved me wrong. The feedback was really helpful and opened my eyes to things I hadn’t noticed. Very nice to work with as well communication was smooth throughout.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
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samuelfxea
United States
Ongoing collaborationNaomi gave me everything I needed to improve my book. She even identified inconsistencies I didn't expect or notice myself. Her feedback was detailed, honest and easy to apply. My manuscript is much stronger because of her help.
$50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?S samuelfxea
United States
Ongoing collaborationI wasn't sure what to expect, but this helped more than I thought. A lot of things were pointed out that I completely missed. Highly recommended 10/10.
$50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?P 
preciousemek689
United Kingdom
I had a great experience working with Naomi. She gave me everything I needed to improve my book, with really helpful feedback and suggestions from start to finish.
$50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?
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F fenella_p
United Kingdom
Honestly, I didn’t think I needed this service at first, but it proved me wrong. The feedback was really helpful and opened my eyes to things I hadn’t noticed. Very nice to work with as well communication was smooth throughout.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?S samuelfxea
United States
Ongoing collaborationNaomi gave me everything I needed to improve my book. She even identified inconsistencies I didn't expect or notice myself. Her feedback was detailed, honest and easy to apply. My manuscript is much stronger because of her help.
$50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?S samuelfxea
United States
Ongoing collaborationI wasn't sure what to expect, but this helped more than I thought. A lot of things were pointed out that I completely missed. Highly recommended 10/10.
$50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?P preciousemek689
United Kingdom
I had a great experience working with Naomi. She gave me everything I needed to improve my book, with really helpful feedback and suggestions from start to finish.
$50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?
