I will developmental edit and proofread your ya fantasy, dark romance, or steamy novel
Turning Manuscripts Into Market Ready Books
About this Gig
Need developmental editing or proofreading for your YA fantasy, dark romance, or steamy novel? Is your dragon-riding heroine falling flat? Does your spice scene need more sizzle? I'll help you turn your rough draft into a polished, immersive novel while preserving your unique voice.
What you get:
Developmental editing: plot, pacing, character arcs & worldbuilding
Line editing: voice, flow, tension & clarity
Proofreading: grammar, spelling, punctuation & consistency
Genre-specific feedback for YA fantasy & dark romance
Track Changes + a personalized editorial letter
I specialize in YA fantasy, dark romance, romantasy, and steamy fiction using Track Changes, PerfectIt, and ProWritingAid.
How I work:
Review your manuscript
Complete a full edit with comments
Deliver your edited file & revision support
Message me before ordering with your word count and goals so I can recommend the best package.
Language:
English
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French
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German
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Portuguese
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Spanish
Audience :
General readers
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
What is developmental editing?
Developmental editing focuses on the big-picture elements of your manuscript, including plot, pacing, character development, story structure, world-building, dialogue, and reader engagement.
Do you edit all fiction genres?
I specialize in YA Fantasy, Dark Romance, and Steamy/Adult Romance, with additional experience in Fantasy, Romantasy, Paranormal Romance, and General Fiction.
Will you rewrite my manuscript?
This gig focuses on developmental feedback, line-level improvements, and proofreading. I won't rewrite your story or change your voice — my job is to strengthen what's already there, not replace it.
Will my manuscript remain confidential?
Absolutely. Your manuscript and all project details remain completely private and will never be shared, copied, or used for any purpose other than your edit.
What will I receive after the review?
You'll receive your manuscript with tracked changes and margin comments, plus a personalized editorial letter summarizing strengths, weaknesses, and specific recommendations for plot, pacing, character arcs, and prose.
Do you edit explicit/mature romance content?
Yes. I edit spice and intimate scenes with the same care as any other scene — for pacing, tension, and emotional payoff — in line with Fiverr's content policies (18+ manuscripts only).

