I will developmental and line edit your fiction novel

Vetted Pro

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English

1,400 orders completed

Gig Summary

All your editing needs in the palm of your hand

Hi there! I'm a mother of five, a small business owner, and a writer. I hold an MFA in Creative Writing from Southern New Hampshire University and have been editing for nearly a decade. If you have an...
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Maryssa G. was selected by the Fiverr Pro team for their expertise.

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  • Book Editing

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About this Gig

Vetted Pro

Hi! I'm Maryssa Gammon of Pocket Editing, an MFA-trained editor with 10 years of experience. I specialize in Fantasy, Sci-Fi, YA, and Romance, helping authors strengthen structure, pacing, and prose while preserving their voice.


What You'll Receive

Depending on your selected package, your edit may include:

  • Tracked changes file showing every correction
  • Clean copy with corrections applied
  • Developmental commentary
  • Resource guide


What I Offer

  • Proofreading (grammar, punctuation, consistency)
  • Copy & Line Editing (clarity, readability, flow; I do not provide stylistic rewrites)
  • Developmental Feedback (structure, pacing, and characters)


What I Don't

  • Full rewrites/ghostwriting
  • Memoirs or nonfiction developmental editing
  • Violent sexual content without prior discussion
  • Any violent sexual content involving minors


A Note:

Editing is collaborative. I correct, clarify, and guide. You apply the feedback and make it shine! While no editor can guarantee a file will be 100% error-free, I will get as close as humanly possible.


Send me a message with your word count, genre, and timeline, and I'll help you choose the right package for your project!

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Children’s books

Horror/ thriller

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Third person limited

Third person omniscient

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Active

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

My Portfolio

Reviews

740 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(713)
(26)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    markyleo

    US

    United States

    5

    I've worked with a lot of people online, and honestly, Fiverr can feel overwhelming because there are hundreds of editors to choose from. Everyone looks qualified on paper, but it's rare to find someone who is both highly skilled and genuinely cares about your project. Maryssa was that person for me. From...

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jenknowsprose

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa delivered an incredibly comprehensive report organized into understandable sections such as characters, world building, and romance. This facilitated maximum understanding of the feedback and, when paired with the annotated copy of my MS, will make revisions a breeze. Constructive feedback...

    $1,000-$2,500

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K

    katrinarosebry

    US

    United States

    5

    She was a wonderful editor to have. Very detailed more than just spelling and grammar editor. She gave me a breakdown to help characters and plot.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G

    garylsmiley

    PT

    Portugal

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Maryssa is great, she really gives detailed notes, makes all sorts of corrections, explains corrections, hints at new ideas/suggestions. She also provided extra documents going over the script. All in all, very detailed in in a relatively short amount of time for an 85,000 words (or so) manuscript.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    andreeadianai

    RO

    Romania

    5

    Maryssa is an angel. My project is messy and complicated and she did sooo MUCH for it, she was so patient and took into consideration all of my requests and concerns about it. I got the hybrid package and everything is so comprehensive and the feedback goes into so much details is amazing. Also, she...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

740 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(713)
(26)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • M

    markyleo

    US

    United States

    5

    I've worked with a lot of people online, and honestly, Fiverr can feel overwhelming because there are hundreds of editors to choose from. Everyone looks qualified on paper, but it's rare to find someone who is both highly skilled and genuinely cares about your project. Maryssa was that person for me. From...

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jenknowsprose

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa delivered an incredibly comprehensive report organized into understandable sections such as characters, world building, and romance. This facilitated maximum understanding of the feedback and, when paired with the annotated copy of my MS, will make revisions a breeze. Constructive feedback...

    $1,000-$2,500

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K

    katrinarosebry

    US

    United States

    5

    She was a wonderful editor to have. Very detailed more than just spelling and grammar editor. She gave me a breakdown to help characters and plot.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G

    garylsmiley

    PT

    Portugal

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Maryssa is great, she really gives detailed notes, makes all sorts of corrections, explains corrections, hints at new ideas/suggestions. She also provided extra documents going over the script. All in all, very detailed in in a relatively short amount of time for an 85,000 words (or so) manuscript.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    andreeadianai

    RO

    Romania

    5

    Maryssa is an angel. My project is messy and complicated and she did sooo MUCH for it, she was so patient and took into consideration all of my requests and concerns about it. I got the hybrid package and everything is so comprehensive and the feedback goes into so much details is amazing. Also, she...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No