I will developmental and line edit your fiction novel

Vetted Pro

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English

1,400 orders completed

Gig Summary

All your editing needs in the palm of your hand

Hi there! I'm a mother of five, a small business owner, and a writer. I hold an MFA in Creative Writing from Southern New Hampshire University and have been editing for nearly a decade. If you have an...
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  • Book Editing

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About this Gig

Vetted Pro

Hi! I'm Maryssa Gammon of Pocket Editing, an MFA-trained editor with 10 years of experience. I specialize in Fantasy, Sci-Fi, YA, and Romance, helping authors strengthen structure, pacing, and prose while preserving their voice.


What You'll Receive

Depending on your selected package, your edit may include:

  • Tracked changes file showing every correction
  • Clean copy with corrections applied
  • Developmental commentary
  • Resource guide


What I Offer

  • Proofreading (grammar, punctuation, consistency)
  • Copy & Line Editing (clarity, readability, flow; I do not provide stylistic rewrites)
  • Developmental Feedback (structure, pacing, and characters)


What I Don't

  • Full rewrites/ghostwriting
  • Memoirs or nonfiction developmental editing
  • Violent sexual content without prior discussion
  • Any violent sexual content involving minors


A Note:

Editing is collaborative. I correct, clarify, and guide. You apply the feedback and make it shine! While no editor can guarantee a file will be 100% error-free, I will get as close as humanly possible.


Send me a message with your word count, genre, and timeline, and I'll help you choose the right package for your project!

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Children’s books

•

Horror/ thriller

Audience :

General readers

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Children

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Teen / young adult

•

Adult

POV:

First person

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Third person limited

•

Third person omniscient

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

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Intermediate

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Advanced

Voice:

Active

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

My Portfolio

Reviews

757 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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(28)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    sam_gcochran

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa did a line edit on my 150,000-word fantasy manuscript (The Aegis War, Book 1 of the Resonance Cycle), and it's some of the most thoughtful editorial feedback I've received. Instead of just rewriting my sentences for me, she used a color-coded highlight system to flag recurring patterns — overused...

    $600-$800

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
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    stephmwrites

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa answered many questions I had before booking her, as I wanted to make sure she was the right fit. Each time she was polite, detailed, and answered quickly. When I finally booked with her, she updated me at various points throughout the process on her status. She was able to do a tight turnaround...

    $600-$800

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A
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    authorbsherrick

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa paid attention to all elements of my 81k word manuscript. She helped with plots gaps, character building, and many other areas. Her attention to detail will help me make the next draft much stronger. She is easy to work with, honest, and great communication.

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    asatheren

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Maryssa is thorough and presents many ways to tighten my writing. I had been over the manuscript too many times, becoming blind it its problems. Her line edits and word choice suggestions helped me rethink the mechanics of the sentences and rethink my own bad writing habits!

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K

    katrinarosebry

    US

    United States

    5

    She was a wonderful editor to have. Very detailed more than just spelling and grammar editor. She gave me a breakdown to help characters and plot.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

757 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(728)
(28)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • S
    image-docs

    sam_gcochran

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa did a line edit on my 150,000-word fantasy manuscript (The Aegis War, Book 1 of the Resonance Cycle), and it's some of the most thoughtful editorial feedback I've received. Instead of just rewriting my sentences for me, she used a color-coded highlight system to flag recurring patterns — overused...

    $600-$800

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    stephmwrites

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa answered many questions I had before booking her, as I wanted to make sure she was the right fit. Each time she was polite, detailed, and answered quickly. When I finally booked with her, she updated me at various points throughout the process on her status. She was able to do a tight turnaround...

    $600-$800

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A
    image-docs

    authorbsherrick

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa paid attention to all elements of my 81k word manuscript. She helped with plots gaps, character building, and many other areas. Her attention to detail will help me make the next draft much stronger. She is easy to work with, honest, and great communication.

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    asatheren

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Maryssa is thorough and presents many ways to tighten my writing. I had been over the manuscript too many times, becoming blind it its problems. Her line edits and word choice suggestions helped me rethink the mechanics of the sentences and rethink my own bad writing habits!

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K

    katrinarosebry

    US

    United States

    5

    She was a wonderful editor to have. Very detailed more than just spelling and grammar editor. She gave me a breakdown to help characters and plot.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No