I will critique your picture book manuscript at the line level

For just $25, I will critique your children's picture book manuscript, 799 words or less, at the line level in as little as 2 days. I will critique your manuscript as a Word document using Comments and Markups. I will help you create a more polished picture book story that is a joy to read and one step closer to being ready to submit to publishers or literary agents.

My critique will focus on the following elements as they relate to picture books:

• Word choice
• Sentence structure
• Paragraph length
• Pacing and flow
• Showing vs. telling
• Tightening word count
• Active vs. passive voice
• Clarity
• Minor grammar and punctuation errors