I will be your developmental book editor and beta reader

5.0
5.0

United Kingdom

I speak English

500 orders completed

Taking your writing to the next level

I turned my lifelong passion for reading into a career as an editor and author. I have worked with many authors in the editing of their manuscripts whilst also publishing and self-publishing my own no...

Buyers keep returning

Shaun has an exceptional number of repeat buyers

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

What people loved about this freelancer

About this Gig

*Please contact me before placing an order. I will do my best to help.*


Do you want fast, friendly, sincere feedback?


I'm Shaun and I'm an editor working across all genres, fiction and non-fiction. I have a Bachelor's Degree in English Literature and I'm also a published author and playwright. Because I've worked in the industry for over nine years, I know the importance of an affordable, thorough developmental editor.

 

What I provide

Numerous suggestions within the manuscript to improve your story

A detailed editor's report summarising my findings

Two read throughs so all issues are addressed

Message follow-up where you can ask me about the feedback I have provided

A speedy delivery


My editing focuses on several areas

Character development, arcs and inconsistencies

Plot development and plot holes

Pacing

Show, don't tell

Structural editing

Comprehension

Use of language

Repeated words and phrases

Commercial appeal


Although this is not a proof-reading service, I will also identify typos to get you one step closer to publication.


No AI is used in this service.


Unsure if I'm the editor for you? Send me a message with any questions.


I look forward to hearing from you.

Language:

English

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Mystery

Science fiction

Audience :

General readers

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Narrative

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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Reviews

387 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(379)
(7)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    nicolakhyser

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    "The Bondswoman: A Life" is my first novel, and Shaun is my first editor. If possible, I don’t want to work with anyone else. He’s not only been an excellent professional in his field, he’s also been a valuable teacher. I respect him, his opinions and his skills. Additionally, he’s personable and has...

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E

    emglenn

    US

    United States

    5

    I ordered to get a sample draft to get an idea of how we'd work together. I appreciate the level of detail, reminders not to head hope in the POV, explaining what might work better, and what does work. This allowed me to see if I want to go all in for the developmental edit. I do, fantastic job!

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • N

    nicolakhyser

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    The Bondswoman: A Life is my first novel, and Shaun is my first non-fiction editor; even before finishing my first rewrite, I knew he would be the best person to give it to the second time around. I couldn't be more pleased with his professional expertise. His attention to detail has been invaluable....

    $400-$600

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    titangriff

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Very happy with the quality of Shaun's feedback. The inclusion of genre suitability feedback was a welcome surprise as I begin thinking about the self-publishing process. I knew I was far down on the waiting list, but Shaun was very communicative, and I knew what to expect. He identified two persistent...

    $50-$100

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K

    knidhi1

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Shaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

387 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(379)
(7)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • N

    nicolakhyser

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    "The Bondswoman: A Life" is my first novel, and Shaun is my first editor. If possible, I don’t want to work with anyone else. He’s not only been an excellent professional in his field, he’s also been a valuable teacher. I respect him, his opinions and his skills. Additionally, he’s personable and has...

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E

    emglenn

    US

    United States

    5

    I ordered to get a sample draft to get an idea of how we'd work together. I appreciate the level of detail, reminders not to head hope in the POV, explaining what might work better, and what does work. This allowed me to see if I want to go all in for the developmental edit. I do, fantastic job!

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • N

    nicolakhyser

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    The Bondswoman: A Life is my first novel, and Shaun is my first non-fiction editor; even before finishing my first rewrite, I knew he would be the best person to give it to the second time around. I couldn't be more pleased with his professional expertise. His attention to detail has been invaluable....

    $400-$600

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    titangriff

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Very happy with the quality of Shaun's feedback. The inclusion of genre suitability feedback was a welcome surprise as I begin thinking about the self-publishing process. I knew I was far down on the waiting list, but Shaun was very communicative, and I knew what to expect. He identified two persistent...

    $50-$100

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K

    knidhi1

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Shaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No