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I will be your developmental book editor and beta reader
Gig Summary
Taking your writing to the next level
I turned my lifelong passion for reading into a career as an editor and author. I have worked with many authors in the editing of their manuscripts whilst also publishing and self-publishing my own no...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
impressionse
United States
Shaun is a wonderful developmental editor. He helped me see things in my manuscript I hadn’t seen myself, providing actionable feedback that I know will make...
nicolakhyser
United States
"The Bondswoman: A Life" is my first novel, and Shaun is my first editor. If possible, I don’t want to work with anyone else. He’s not only been an excellent...
padgettfarmer
United States
This is the fifth book Shaun has done a dev edit on for this series. He knows exactly what I need and how to fix it. Shaun is incredible. I wish I could see...
knidhi1
United States
Shaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.
About this Gig
*Please contact me before placing an order. I will do my best to help.*
Do you want fast, friendly, sincere feedback?
I'm Shaun and I'm an editor working across all genres, fiction and non-fiction. I have a Bachelor's Degree in English Literature and I'm also a published author and playwright. Because I've worked in the industry for over nine years, I know the importance of an affordable, thorough developmental editor.
What I provide
Numerous suggestions within the manuscript to improve your story
A detailed editor's report summarising my findings
Two read throughs so all issues are addressed
Message follow-up where you can ask me about the feedback I have provided
A speedy delivery
My editing focuses on several areas
Character development, arcs and inconsistencies
Plot development and plot holes
Pacing
Show, don't tell
Structural editing
Comprehension
Use of language
Repeated words and phrases
Commercial appeal
Although this is not a proof-reading service, I will also identify typos to get you one step closer to publication.
No AI is used in this service.
Unsure if I'm the editor for you? Send me a message with any questions.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
How should I submit my writing?
Please submit in a Word Doc.
Should I contact you before placing an order?
Yes, please. You need to know I am the editor for you, but I also need to know if I can complete the job to your satisfaction. I never want to start a job without knowing I can do it well. Send me a message and we can chat.
Reviews
398 reviews for this Gig
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hypnodan66
United States
Shaun delivered an overall developmental constructive critique for my novel, as well as a detailed inline commentary for the whole book. This was worth the fee, for sure. Some of his comments will definitely improve the book. But there were places in the inline commentary where it felt like he rushed...
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?I impressionse
United States
Shaun is a wonderful developmental editor. He helped me see things in my manuscript I hadn’t seen myself, providing actionable feedback that I know will make the next version of my draft even better. I would definitely work with him again in the future!
$200-$400
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?N nicolakhyser
United States
Ongoing collaboration"The Bondswoman: A Life" is my first novel, and Shaun is my first editor. If possible, I don’t want to work with anyone else. He’s not only been an excellent professional in his field, he’s also been a valuable teacher. I respect him, his opinions and his skills. Additionally, he’s personable and has...
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?P 
padgettfarmer
United States
Ongoing collaborationThis is the fifth book Shaun has done a dev edit on for this series. He knows exactly what I need and how to fix it. Shaun is incredible. I wish I could see things clearly like he does. I wouldn't trust anyone else like this.
$400-$600
Price
11 months
Duration
Helpful?K knidhi1
United States
Ongoing collaborationShaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
398 reviews for this Gig
| (389) | ||
| (8) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
H hypnodan66
United States
Shaun delivered an overall developmental constructive critique for my novel, as well as a detailed inline commentary for the whole book. This was worth the fee, for sure. Some of his comments will definitely improve the book. But there were places in the inline commentary where it felt like he rushed...
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?I impressionse
United States
Shaun is a wonderful developmental editor. He helped me see things in my manuscript I hadn’t seen myself, providing actionable feedback that I know will make the next version of my draft even better. I would definitely work with him again in the future!
$200-$400
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?N nicolakhyser
United States
Ongoing collaboration"The Bondswoman: A Life" is my first novel, and Shaun is my first editor. If possible, I don’t want to work with anyone else. He’s not only been an excellent professional in his field, he’s also been a valuable teacher. I respect him, his opinions and his skills. Additionally, he’s personable and has...
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?P padgettfarmer
United States
Ongoing collaborationThis is the fifth book Shaun has done a dev edit on for this series. He knows exactly what I need and how to fix it. Shaun is incredible. I wish I could see things clearly like he does. I wouldn't trust anyone else like this.
$400-$600
Price
11 months
Duration
Helpful?K knidhi1
United States
Ongoing collaborationShaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
