I will be your developmental book editor and beta reader
Taking your writing to the next level
Buyers keep returning
Shaun has an exceptional number of repeat buyers
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
nicolakhyser

United States
"The Bondswoman: A Life" is my first novel, and Shaun is my first editor. If possible, I don’t want to work with anyone else. He’s not only been an excellent...
emglenn

United States
I ordered to get a sample draft to get an idea of how we'd work together. I appreciate the level of detail, reminders not to head hope in the POV, explaining...
nicolakhyser

United States
The Bondswoman: A Life is my first novel, and Shaun is my first non-fiction editor; even before finishing my first rewrite, I knew he would be the best person...
titangriff

United States
Very happy with the quality of Shaun's feedback. The inclusion of genre suitability feedback was a welcome surprise as I begin thinking about the self-publishing...
knidhi1

United States
Shaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.
About this Gig
*Please contact me before placing an order. I will do my best to help.*
Do you want fast, friendly, sincere feedback?
I'm Shaun and I'm an editor working across all genres, fiction and non-fiction. I have a Bachelor's Degree in English Literature and I'm also a published author and playwright. Because I've worked in the industry for over nine years, I know the importance of an affordable, thorough developmental editor.
What I provide
Numerous suggestions within the manuscript to improve your story
A detailed editor's report summarising my findings
Two read throughs so all issues are addressed
Message follow-up where you can ask me about the feedback I have provided
A speedy delivery
My editing focuses on several areas
Character development, arcs and inconsistencies
Plot development and plot holes
Pacing
Show, don't tell
Structural editing
Comprehension
Use of language
Repeated words and phrases
Commercial appeal
Although this is not a proof-reading service, I will also identify typos to get you one step closer to publication.
No AI is used in this service.
Unsure if I'm the editor for you? Send me a message with any questions.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
How should I submit my writing?
Please submit in a Word Doc.
Should I contact you before placing an order?
Yes, please. You need to know I am the editor for you, but I also need to know if I can complete the job to your satisfaction. I never want to start a job without knowing I can do it well. Send me a message and we can chat.
387 reviews for this Gig
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N nicolakhyser
Repeat Client

United States
"The Bondswoman: A Life" is my first novel, and Shaun is my first editor. If possible, I don’t want to work with anyone else. He’s not only been an excellent professional in his field, he’s also been a valuable teacher. I respect him, his opinions and his skills. Additionally, he’s personable and has...
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?E emglenn

United States
I ordered to get a sample draft to get an idea of how we'd work together. I appreciate the level of detail, reminders not to head hope in the POV, explaining what might work better, and what does work. This allowed me to see if I want to go all in for the developmental edit. I do, fantastic job!
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?N nicolakhyser
Repeat Client

United States
The Bondswoman: A Life is my first novel, and Shaun is my first non-fiction editor; even before finishing my first rewrite, I knew he would be the best person to give it to the second time around. I couldn't be more pleased with his professional expertise. His attention to detail has been invaluable....
$400-$600
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?T titangriff

United States
Very happy with the quality of Shaun's feedback. The inclusion of genre suitability feedback was a welcome surprise as I begin thinking about the self-publishing process. I knew I was far down on the waiting list, but Shaun was very communicative, and I knew what to expect. He identified two persistent...
$50-$100
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K knidhi1
Repeat Client

United States
Shaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
387 reviews for this Gig
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| (7) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
N nicolakhyser
Repeat Client

United States
"The Bondswoman: A Life" is my first novel, and Shaun is my first editor. If possible, I don’t want to work with anyone else. He’s not only been an excellent professional in his field, he’s also been a valuable teacher. I respect him, his opinions and his skills. Additionally, he’s personable and has...
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?E emglenn

United States
I ordered to get a sample draft to get an idea of how we'd work together. I appreciate the level of detail, reminders not to head hope in the POV, explaining what might work better, and what does work. This allowed me to see if I want to go all in for the developmental edit. I do, fantastic job!
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?N nicolakhyser
Repeat Client

United States
The Bondswoman: A Life is my first novel, and Shaun is my first non-fiction editor; even before finishing my first rewrite, I knew he would be the best person to give it to the second time around. I couldn't be more pleased with his professional expertise. His attention to detail has been invaluable....
$400-$600
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?T titangriff

United States
Very happy with the quality of Shaun's feedback. The inclusion of genre suitability feedback was a welcome surprise as I begin thinking about the self-publishing process. I knew I was far down on the waiting list, but Shaun was very communicative, and I knew what to expect. He identified two persistent...
$50-$100
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K knidhi1
Repeat Client

United States
Shaun did the development edit of my fiction manuscript. His inline comments and suggestions were very helpful in improving the quality of the manuscript.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?

