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I will intensively beta read your fiction novel, any genre

United Kingdom

I speak English, French

2 orders completed

Experience candid feedback straight from a reader's mind!

Hi! I'm Shelomi, an avid reader and filmophile for 14 years, and a current book writer. I also write poetry, having won multiple poetry contests. Alongside studying English, I'm a sensitive beta/pro...
About this Gig

Need a reliable beta reader for your unpublished or published novel, short story or manuscript? Book me for invaluable feedback!


Please contact me before ordering, so I can see how to best help you and your novel.


Reader Report - detailed feedback on the following:

  • Characters, Dialogue and Character Voice
  • Plot, Pace and Tension
  • Pace, Continuity and Chapter-length
  • World Building
  • Overall Impression
  • Reader's Satisfaction


From a reader's perspective, I will read your writing and provide a comprehensive, applicable critique. My candid feedback will focus on making your writing shine with clarity and comprehension.


Some things I consider while reading include:

  • Does the first chapter grab and hold my attention?
  • Do the characters go through meaningful development?
  • Is the plot clear and believable?
  • Are there moments where the pacing feels off?
  • Is the dialogue natural and engaging?
  • Is the ending satisfying?
  • Are there any errors or inconsistencies?
  • What parts may be reader favourites?


Color-coded in-depth inline comments through the book:

  • Reactions (to understand the reader's mind as they go).
  • Questions/doubts about the book and its components.
  • Grammar/eloquence mistakes.
  • Quotes.

Genre:

Adventure

Children’s books

Comic book

Horror/ thriller

Language:

English

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