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I will beta read your first chapter and give honest reader feedback
Translator, Editor, Proofreader, Writer, Localizer
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eLearning Content Development
About this Gig
Not sure if the beginning of your book is strong enough to make readers keep turning the pages?
Send me the first 1,000 words of your manuscript, and I will beta read your opening from a real reader's perspective and give you honest, concise feedback.
For $5, you will receive my First 1,000 Words Test, including:
- Hook and opening strength
- Pacing
- Character interest
- Clarity
- Reader engagement
- Overall first impression
- WOULD I KEEP READING? YES, MAYBE, or NO
I will also explain what caught my attention, where my interest dropped (if it did), anything that confused me, and the most important issue I would consider improving.
This service is ideal for authors who want a quick, affordable first impression before investing in a complete manuscript critique or full beta reading.
Please note: This Gig is for reader feedback only. It does not include proofreading, line editing, rewriting, or a detailed developmental edit.
Need feedback on your complete book? You can find my comprehensive professional beta reading service on my profile.
English and Spanish manuscripts are welcome.
Language:
English
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Spanish
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
B-TRAY Hotel Supplies
Ecommerce
Proficient Translator with extensive experience working with B-TRAY, a leading provider of hotel supplies. Translated a variety of materials, including marketing materials, communication with clients, and sales documentation.
Mar 2018
1inch Network
Crypto & Blockchain
Translations for 1inch Network, a leading decentralized exchange aggregator. Translation of website content, marketing materials, and user interface elements. Proficient in handling technical and financial terminology.
May 2021
